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Hummingbird Leap

Written: May 25, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
hummingbirds with chartreuse throats scared to fly off the ground favored tightrope walking where the sky and ocean collide she considered attempting flight  another time a circus visited town another area where she may hide hidden under a fake scowl nestled comfortably away        from the mother bird's picks a fledgling with propensity with paralytic rhinitis without plucking feathers to reveal a fractured limb or scars carved into wings stitched together a dinky bird soon gasped for air hurriedly touched line and took on a Goliath. leep * * * to join her friend. weird and delicate. misfits

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Date: 5/28/2024 9:27:00 AM
SP, the description of what it takes to get going is breathtaking. It takes time, but then the fun begins....even for the misfit, nerd, or weirdo. We really don't want to hide forever. Life is too short.
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Date: 5/26/2024 9:31:00 AM
A deep poem which poem which effectively captures the delicate balance between fear and courage through its vivid imagery and careful structure. The use of the hummingbird as a metaphor for vulnerable individuals facing their fears adds depth and emotional resonance. The visual elements and rhythmic flow enhance the poem’s impact, making it a poignant reflection on bravery, vulnerability, and the importance of finding one’s place among kindred spirits.
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Date: 5/25/2024 4:56:00 PM
Stunning poem my dear Sotto. Whatever nature makes is beatifuly to be admired. Whatever you write is something to be admired. I love humminbirds, difficult to see them but beautiful to look at.. Enchanting as you always write. Love/ María
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Date: 5/25/2024 4:22:00 PM
delightful and entertaining poem, Sotto! I got a kick out of these words: a fledgling with propensity with paralytic rhinitis. The ending words and structure spoke to me especially 'to join her friend. weird and delicate misfits. I suppose I have an affinity for misfits, those gifted and unique creatures (and humans too) who seem to take on life in a joyous, unique way. Truly liked this poem. Have a fabulous evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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