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Fluttering

fluttering of wings zig and zagging in a blink iridescent gem Submitted on August 16, 2018 for contest HUMMINGBIRD HAIKU sponsored by TANIA KITCHIN - RANKED 4TH

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 9/16/2018 3:54:00 PM

Good Job friend! Congrats on your win!

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/16/2018 4:07:00 PM

Thanks, Timothy, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Susan Gentry

Date: 8/21/2018 11:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. An excellent haiku!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/21/2018 9:29:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/20/2018 5:26:00 PM

Very lovely Line. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/20/2018 6:08:00 PM

Thank you so much, Connie. Most appreciated.

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 8/20/2018 4:37:00 AM

Beautiful write,Line. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/20/2018 7:13:00 AM

Thank you, Olusegun. Much appreciated.

Virginia Waters

Date: 8/19/2018 1:46:00 AM

Congrats on your winner- V

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/19/2018 1:05:00 PM

Thanks, Virginia. Much appreciated.

Janis Thompson

Date: 8/18/2018 5:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your top placement. Intriguing haiku.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/18/2018 5:38:00 PM

Thanks, Sian. Much appreciated.

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/18/2018 4:01:00 PM

Look at you, close to the top again, congratulations...

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/18/2018 5:08:00 PM

Once in a while... Thanks for your visit, Charlie.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/18/2018 10:26:00 AM

Awesome, you made the list and this time, I saw I did too. That was a great start to my morning! Congrats to you.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/18/2018 10:30:00 AM

Good go, Andrea.

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/18/2018 10:09:00 AM

What a lovely little poem, Line !! Well done!! Congrats on your high placement!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/18/2018 10:30:00 AM

Thanks, Carrie. Much appreciated.

Curtis Moorman

Date: 8/18/2018 9:37:00 AM

Great write, Line! Congrats on your win in this fabulous little contest.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/18/2018 10:31:00 AM

Thanks, Curtis, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/18/2018 8:40:00 AM

I love it! Congratulations on your win Line :)) xomo!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/18/2018 9:27:00 AM

Thank you, Maureen. Most appreciated.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/18/2018 5:23:00 AM

Loved the zig, zagging, so true of hummingbirds, congratulations on your win in the contest!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/18/2018 7:59:00 AM

Thank you so much, Tania. Most appreciated. It was a fun contest and I'm looking forward to reading all the entries.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2018 7:06:00 PM

I'm with Carol. I don't see how she will judge this one, with all the cute poems zig zagging about !!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/17/2018 8:37:00 PM

LOL it will be interesting to say the least.

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/17/2018 2:15:00 PM

Yeah sure, but how do they taste?

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/17/2018 7:00:00 PM

Reminds me of a t-shirt I saw: I like children but I can't eat a whole one. LOL

L. J. Carber

Date: 8/17/2018 6:49:00 AM

I like the 'motion' caught hear, not often done in haiku--very nice, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/17/2018 7:23:00 AM

Thank you L.J., for your much appreciated visit and comment.