Home » Poems » Line Gauthier » Fluttering

Fluttering

fluttering of wings zig and zagging in a blink iridescent gem Submitted on August 16, 2018 for contest HUMMINGBIRD HAIKU sponsored by TANIA KITCHIN - RANKED 4TH

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 9/16/2018 3:54:00 PM

Good Job friend! Congrats on your win!

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/16/2018 4:07:00 PM

Thanks, Timothy, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Susan Gentry

Date: 8/21/2018 11:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. An excellent haiku!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/21/2018 9:29:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/20/2018 5:26:00 PM

Very lovely Line. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/20/2018 6:08:00 PM

Thank you so much, Connie. Most appreciated.

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 8/20/2018 4:37:00 AM

Beautiful write,Line. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/20/2018 7:13:00 AM

Thank you, Olusegun. Much appreciated.

Virginia Waters

Date: 8/19/2018 1:46:00 AM

Congrats on your winner- V

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/19/2018 1:05:00 PM

Thanks, Virginia. Much appreciated.

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 8/18/2018 5:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your top placement. Intriguing haiku.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/18/2018 5:38:00 PM

Thanks, Sian. Much appreciated.

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/18/2018 4:01:00 PM

Look at you, close to the top again, congratulations...

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/18/2018 5:08:00 PM

Once in a while... Thanks for your visit, Charlie.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/18/2018 10:26:00 AM

Awesome, you made the list and this time, I saw I did too. That was a great start to my morning! Congrats to you.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/18/2018 10:30:00 AM

Good go, Andrea.

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/18/2018 10:09:00 AM

What a lovely little poem, Line !! Well done!! Congrats on your high placement!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/18/2018 10:30:00 AM

Thanks, Carrie. Much appreciated.

Curtis Moorman

Date: 8/18/2018 9:37:00 AM

Great write, Line! Congrats on your win in this fabulous little contest.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/18/2018 10:31:00 AM

Thanks, Curtis, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/18/2018 8:40:00 AM

I love it! Congratulations on your win Line :)) xomo!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/18/2018 9:27:00 AM

Thank you, Maureen. Most appreciated.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/18/2018 5:23:00 AM

Loved the zig, zagging, so true of hummingbirds, congratulations on your win in the contest!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/18/2018 7:59:00 AM

Thank you so much, Tania. Most appreciated. It was a fun contest and I'm looking forward to reading all the entries.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2018 7:06:00 PM

I'm with Carol. I don't see how she will judge this one, with all the cute poems zig zagging about !!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/17/2018 8:37:00 PM

LOL it will be interesting to say the least.

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/17/2018 2:15:00 PM

Yeah sure, but how do they taste?

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/17/2018 7:00:00 PM

Reminds me of a t-shirt I saw: I like children but I can't eat a whole one. LOL

L. J. Carber

Date: 8/17/2018 6:49:00 AM

I like the 'motion' caught hear, not often done in haiku--very nice, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/17/2018 7:23:00 AM

Thank you L.J., for your much appreciated visit and comment.