Line Gauthier Poet Haiku

Fluttering

fluttering of wings
zig and zagging in a blink
iridescent gem



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on August 16, 2018 for contest HUMMINGBIRD HAIKU sponsored by TANIA KITCHIN  -  RANKED 4TH

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Timothy Mcguire September 16, 2018 at 3:54 PM Good Job friend! Congrats on your win! Line Gauthier September 16, 2018 at 4:07 PM Thanks, Timothy, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Susan Gentry August 21, 2018 at 11:10 AM Congratulations on your win. An excellent haiku! Line Gauthier August 21, 2018 at 9:29 PM Thank you so much, Susan, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Connie Marcum Wong August 20, 2018 at 5:26 PM Very lovely Line. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : ) Line Gauthier August 20, 2018 at 6:08 PM Thank you so much, Connie. Most appreciated.

Olusegun Arowolo August 20, 2018 at 4:37 AM Beautiful write,Line. Congrats on your well deserved win. Line Gauthier August 20, 2018 at 7:13 AM Thank you, Olusegun. Much appreciated.

Virginia Waters August 19, 2018 at 1:46 AM Congrats on your winner- V Line Gauthier August 19, 2018 at 1:05 PM Thanks, Virginia. Much appreciated.

Janis Medders Tobechi August 18, 2018 at 5:35 PM Congratulations on your top placement. Intriguing haiku. Line Gauthier August 18, 2018 at 5:38 PM Thanks, Sian. Much appreciated.

Charlie Smith August 18, 2018 at 4:01 PM Look at you, close to the top again, congratulations... Line Gauthier August 18, 2018 at 5:08 PM Once in a while... Thanks for your visit, Charlie.

Andrea Dietrich August 18, 2018 at 10:26 AM Awesome, you made the list and this time, I saw I did too. That was a great start to my morning! Congrats to you. Line Gauthier August 18, 2018 at 10:30 AM Good go, Andrea.

Carrie Richards August 18, 2018 at 10:09 AM What a lovely little poem, Line !! Well done!! Congrats on your high placement! Line Gauthier August 18, 2018 at 10:30 AM Thanks, Carrie. Much appreciated.

Curtis Moorman August 18, 2018 at 9:37 AM Great write, Line! Congrats on your win in this fabulous little contest. Line Gauthier August 18, 2018 at 10:31 AM Thanks, Curtis, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 18, 2018 at 8:40 AM I love it! Congratulations on your win Line :)) xomo! Line Gauthier August 18, 2018 at 9:27 AM Thank you, Maureen. Most appreciated.

Tania Kitchin August 18, 2018 at 5:23 AM Loved the zig, zagging, so true of hummingbirds, congratulations on your win in the contest! Line Gauthier August 18, 2018 at 7:59 AM Thank you so much, Tania. Most appreciated. It was a fun contest and I'm looking forward to reading all the entries.

Andrea Dietrich August 17, 2018 at 7:06 PM I'm with Carol. I don't see how she will judge this one, with all the cute poems zig zagging about !! Line Gauthier August 17, 2018 at 8:37 PM LOL it will be interesting to say the least.

Charlie Smith August 17, 2018 at 2:15 PM Yeah sure, but how do they taste? Line Gauthier August 17, 2018 at 7:00 PM Reminds me of a t-shirt I saw: I like children but I can't eat a whole one. LOL

L. J. Carber August 17, 2018 at 6:49 AM I like the 'motion' caught hear, not often done in haiku--very nice, Line! Line Gauthier August 17, 2018 at 7:23 AM Thank you L.J., for your much appreciated visit and comment.