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Humans, Ants and Shadows

HUMANS, ANTS AND SHADOWS The smallest ants cast long shadows. . . Little they are but see how discipline they can be Millimeters apart, they all unify in a single file It's a dismay that at some point Humans, don't show such discipline Instead of waiting for their turn Sometimes one overtakes, one assumes someone else's post just to be on time selfish motive or emergency, who knows? Polymorphic ants, they merge to do an umbrella of tasks Humans regardless of status and age All are entitled to do some chore inside ones home, school or workplace Hand and hand in a web of labor Talking to each other with their own way: pheromones Some colonies act as one but some misunderstands, they fight. Humans as well does communicate with the languages that abound this earth. Hence, we can readily convey our thoughts but still, highest among creations, there are still confusions and war. Amazing! Such little creatures, Ants and we, humans, one way or another cast long shadows. . . _________________________ ©O. E. Guillermo 03:31 pm, January 16, 2015 Note: Pheromones -- chemical substances released by insects (e.g. ants, bees, wasps etc.) the influences their physical behaviour particularly communication, signals.
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Date: 3/25/2015 6:44:00 AM
Humans need to re-learn nature's way, don't they, Olive? Hugs, Julia, xx
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Date: 3/26/2015 6:20:00 AM
you are right Julia.. :)! Thank you Julia.. :)!
Date: 2/27/2015 2:48:00 PM
Ants are amazing creatures and we could learn a lot from them, as well as, other species. It makes one wonder...which is the "higher" species? Quite a profound poem.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/6/2015 7:04:00 AM
thanks much M.L. :) indeed.. sometimes some humans act more like an animal..
Date: 2/6/2015 1:57:00 PM
i like the influences, similar, only specie separates....good work, Olive! jimbo
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/7/2015 8:37:00 AM
right... :) thanks for the visit James.. :D!
Date: 1/18/2015 2:48:00 PM
So much truth in your words Olive. Today's world is a blinkered war between humans and anything else that exists on this wonderful planet. It's an 'Us and Them' world, kinda sad and pathetic from a humans point of view. Long live the animals, for as they live, maybe we'll learn from them before we wipe them all out. Good luck in the contest, James :) :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/21/2015 8:17:00 AM
thanks much JAmes.. :)! God bless you always.. :)
Date: 1/17/2015 8:50:00 AM
Another lovely poem, Olive_eloi! I like how you compare humans and ants; there is a lot that we can learn from their behaviour. gl in the contest. Have a lovely weekend! hugs // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/17/2015 4:55:00 PM
the shadows, I use as a symbolic term that points kn the similarities but the thing is ants are small and humans a lot bigger. . but to leassons learned they point out big lessons for humans
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/17/2015 4:53:00 PM
esp when they align as one..... as for how many times I so experiencr being pushed and being overtaken in a line because am small and i do it esp for old people though.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/17/2015 4:51:00 PM
Happy weekend Paul. . :) Appteciate your drop by.. I thought no one will like this poem as somehow the theme is difficult. but i so wish to bring out the similarities between ands and humans..
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