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Humanity's Waters

The vivifying waters of humanity we are That into the spectacular river of life flow Following the banks destiny has curved Ourselves into the oblivion’s ocean throw © Demetrios Trifiatis 14 APRIL 2014

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/24/2015 8:35:00 AM

Very enlightening write :) blessings dear friend

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2014 6:38:00 PM

oh my. we end up in oblivion. Sadly, you are right. There is only so much history that can be taught and remembered by those of the future!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/15/2014 3:53:00 AM

If Man doesn't listen to nature, very soon he will be in big trouble! Thank you so much dear Andrea. Yes, sadly I am right and for that reason we have to think of the future.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/14/2014 8:05:00 AM

Hi Demi...this is so deep ... we all flow down our own separate streams and rivulets till we merge with bigger rivers..and eventually we all finish in the same vast ocean. Many deductions lie hidden between the lines, if one cares to look for them. I could write an essay about this! // paul

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/14/2014 8:10:00 AM

I am certain you would! It is certain the truth is to be read between the lines! Who able is he would do! Thank you my friend Paul for your visit and gracious comment!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/14/2014 8:04:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your creative work this morning..Do we go with the flow or swim against the tide?..It is much, much harder to go against the tide but the shore that we reach might be a much better one..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/14/2014 8:14:00 AM

To swim against the tide will be waste of time for in the end winners will never be against the divine! On a human level though we sometimes have to swim against the tide in order to correct something with God's help! Thank you dear Sara for visiting and commenting!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/14/2014 3:51:00 AM

- Good morning Demetrios - few words with great depth and gives food for thought and opinion. - Have a lovely Monday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/14/2014 5:53:00 AM

Fortunately there are a few people like yourself that food for thought in my writing find! Thank my dear, dear friend Anne-Lise for taken the time to read and comment!