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Humanity

Harmonious co-existence vexes as Ugliness of spirit overrides all sense: Man, woman, young, old - locked in constant conflict. Antagonistic leanings destructive, but Nations are split by doctrine more than terrain; Isolated, insular and self-serving. Tempestuous relationships reign supreme; Yawning chasm between status quo and potence. Halcyon adventures wait amongst the stars: Unite, Peoples of Earth... and ascend as one. Majesty of universe lies before us, Architects, wholly, of our own destiny. Negative acts consigned to history books; Inherent self-destructive urges shunned by Transcending schisms and grasping conjoined purpose. Years uncounted may pass, but faith shall be pursed*. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - * pursed = rewarded 11 syllables on every line - checked with howmanysllables.com 14 November 2017 - my first Acrostic poem. For the "Humanity - Acrostic" contest, sponsored by John Hamilton. (2nd Place)

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Date: 11/29/2017 11:24:00 AM
You have tackled this form with verve, John, offering us double helpings as a bonus! Content and deliverance extremely well done. Congratulations on this high-flying and deserved win. Regards // paul
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John Michaels
Date: 12/2/2017 9:29:00 AM
Much appreciated, thanks Paul. Kind regards, John.
Date: 11/25/2017 12:54:00 PM
Like this very much, Congrats on your win and placement in the contest. WHITE ON. ---James
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John Michaels
Date: 11/27/2017 2:10:00 PM
Many thanks for the kind and supportive comments! All the best, John.
Date: 11/20/2017 11:27:00 PM
yes, that poem of mine was a limerick but then I noticed we had to submit it as a rhyme for the contest, and well, limerick is a rhyme after all. haha!! Let me go find a poem of yours I have not seen yet.
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John Michaels
Date: 11/25/2017 8:37:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by, Andrea!! All the best, John.
Date: 11/18/2017 8:14:00 PM
I love your insightful Acrostic John. Bravo! Congratulations on your well deserved win! : )
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John Michaels
Date: 11/25/2017 8:34:00 AM
Thanks very much for your kind comments, Connie! Kind regards, John.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/18/2017 8:15:00 PM
Wow, if this is your first you will become a master at them in no time!
Date: 11/18/2017 7:39:00 PM
HEY< way to go. A well deserved win. Congrats, John
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John Michaels
Date: 11/25/2017 7:58:00 AM
Thanks very much, Andrea!! All the best, John.
Date: 11/18/2017 7:13:00 PM
Wow, John, two great, well-written Acrostics! Congratulations on your podium placement in the contest. Sandra
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Date: 11/18/2017 11:26:00 AM
Congrats John on an excellent entry in my contest, you would never know this is your first acrostic, I can just imagine what is yet to come, nice win!
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John Michaels
Date: 11/18/2017 12:53:00 PM
Thank you for the kind comments and for my placement! This was a really enjoyable contest and let me learn a new form. Kind regards, John
Date: 11/18/2017 4:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, John - you went above-and-beyond with two great stanzas - nice ... blessings to you, friend, and keep on writing! :-)
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John Michaels
Date: 11/18/2017 12:54:00 PM
Thanks for the great comments, Greg - pleased you liked it!! All the best, John.
Date: 11/15/2017 3:29:00 PM
You put a lot of hard and great work into this poetry, John.VERY well written. I hope it fares well for you in the contest.
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John Michaels
Date: 11/18/2017 12:56:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea!! Yes, it did quite well, thanks! All the best, John.
Date: 11/14/2017 8:12:00 PM
Wow John, a powerful and inspiring Acrostic so smoothly and seamlessly written You expressed very poetically the facets of humanity; the good the bad and the ugly.., and our need for faith. Excellent and good luck in the contest!
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John Michaels
Date: 11/15/2017 2:03:00 AM
Hi Susan. Thanks for the great feedback! Really pleased you liked my first attempt at an Acrostic. All the best, John.

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