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Humanity

Hostility and hatred are daily, wrongly, sustained and fed.
Unjust and unfair ones create chaotic laws and discrimination.
Multitudes of people ignorantly choose to live from their egos.
Afghanistan armies war to harm others, even their brothers .
Nations of violence make or take our innocent beds.
Individuals daily pray for a comforting spiritual clue
Throughout life, despite erratic dances with fear, and
Yield we would gladly do if love became the rule.

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Eve Roper Date: 12/4/2017 7:04:00 PM Congratulations, CayCay, a great acrostic. Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply

Beautiful Scars Date: 12/4/2017 6:41:00 AM this is so true, very profound acrostic sweet CayCay :) thank you and congrats :) Login to Reply

Winged Warrior Date: 11/22/2017 8:58:00 AM Humanity well displayed CayCay...and a late congrats!!! on your win my friend...god bless...^WW^ Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 11/20/2017 2:23:00 PM Hi CayCay, These is a good take on the contest theme. It made the reader think about what state "humanity" is in. Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis Login to Reply

John Hamilton Date: 11/18/2017 11:59:00 AM Nice to see you back Cay Cay, enjoyed your acrostic, congrats on a fine placement! Ps check spelling Login to Reply John Hamilton Date: 11/18/2017 8:40:00 PM I think it's good to not be good with adultery! CayCay Jennings Date: 11/18/2017 12:26:00 PM According to spell check I'm not good with adultery, but I found no other misspellings. Always enjoy your contests, John - you are appreciated. It is good to be back, thank you. All the best ... CayCay

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 11/18/2017 4:26:00 AM Congratulations on your fine win, CayCay - blessings to you, friend, and keep on writing! :-) Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 11/18/2017 10:21:00 AM Thank you, Gregory! All the best to you ... CayCay

Joanna Daniel Date: 11/15/2017 6:51:00 AM I like your acrostic, CayCay, well done:) Login to Reply

Barry Stebbings Date: 11/15/2017 4:45:00 AM Very well written Acrostic, CayCay. Completely agree with your third line. Good luck in the contest. // Barry Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 11/15/2017 1:03:00 AM Yay! They fixed it CayCay! Thank you Poetry Soup Team! I feel the way you do as your thoughts echo mine CayCay. I hope this excellent poem speaks to many! : ) Login to Reply

Mike Hauser Date: 11/14/2017 8:40:00 PM Great job... Very thought provoking! Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 11/15/2017 5:40:00 AM Thank you, Mike. Humanity is thought-provoking even without an Acrostic, isn't it? Pleases me that you found 'substance' in my write. Go in a good way ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/14/2017 7:22:00 PM wow, you did an amazing job with the theme, Caycay. Is this one already filled? I was writing all the contests I still needed to try and don't even remember seeing this one. OH MY. I hear Joe out front. Don't even have dinner made!!! Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 11/15/2017 5:38:00 AM So glad you found it 'amazing', I couldn't hope for more. Yesterday, when last I looked at John's contest, there was plenty of 'room' for more submissions, don't fret. Now, get in that kitchen and rattle those pots and pans! Love ... CayCay

Jannie Breedt Date: 11/14/2017 12:39:00 PM Hi Cay Cay, thats exactly how I feel. All in a nut shell. I live for people like you. The psychopaths cannot destroy love. I am convalescing from tick bite fever and will inbox you Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 11/14/2017 10:25:00 PM Jannie, why did you want to go and get a tick bite, it is an horrible idea. When? Have you been house bound? What kind of pain? Is there a prescription involved? Oh, I'm glad you related to my poem, it is truly how I feel, also - simplicity is one of my fav words, along with individualism. Feel better and be blessed ... CayCay (I'm so tired that giggles are setting - I will look for your message tomorrow, k?)

Vijay Pandit Date: 11/14/2017 11:49:00 AM Good discourse on humanity--best for a win CayCay! Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 11/14/2017 10:26:00 PM Thank you for your encouraging comments. I appreciate you sharing you response. Blessings ... CayCay

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 11/14/2017 11:29:00 AM I agree totally w/Janice. The move from the impure to the pure of heart was cool acrostic journey that this poem took us on, CayCay. Splendid pen touch of tender emotions. Pure poetry, dear. Love and smiles always. Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 11/14/2017 11:37:00 AM So you climbed out of the gutter and came to see me! (I'm just having fun with you.) Your comments are a soothing uplift and I am delighted to have them. Thanks you and Blessings ... CayCay

Janice Canerdy Date: 11/14/2017 11:19:00 AM Great acrostic, CayCay, taking us from the bad and ugly to the good and hopeful! Janice Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 11/14/2017 11:38:00 AM Thank you for saying so, Janice - You are sweet and I appreciate your presence on Soup and here, on my poem page. Blessings ... CayCay