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Monoku

Tradition reigned in haiku writing until the 1970s when a variant to the haiku was invented. It became known as the monoku.

The monoku is a one-line poem variation of the haiku. Three writers of poetry in the 1970s made the monoku popular as a form of haiku. They are:

  • Marlene Mountain who wrote monoku in horizontal line
  • Hiroaki Sato who translated Japanese haiku into one line in English. Sometimes that line is in vertical rather than horizontal form
  • Matsuo Allard wrote essays in favor of the monoku form and published several magazines devoted to the form

Monoku is written as a single line which contains seventeen syllables or less. It includes a caesura (a pause) dictated by a sense or speech rhythm with little or no punctuation. The first word in the line is not capitalized and is in lowercase.

human tree's leaves fall, time ticks hope in fresh rebirth ~ sower of dreams

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Date: 1/13/2019 9:35:00 AM
Hi Silent, love the content of your Monoku. (Hope in fresh rebirth) - (Sower of dreams) Says it all my friend. Excellent. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 12/30/2017 10:20:00 PM
love it, i just can't seem to get the hang of it....
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Date: 12/29/2017 8:34:00 AM
How lovely and uplifting, S.O. Janice
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Date: 12/29/2017 5:42:00 AM
inspiring my friend!
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Date: 12/28/2017 8:14:00 PM
saying so much in so little is a true art form. You perfected it!
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Date: 12/28/2017 7:57:00 PM
Very nice, Silent One. Sower of dreams we all are!!
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Date: 12/28/2017 5:17:00 PM
Picture is a haunting accompaniment to your poem. What dreams will it sow...
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Date: 12/28/2017 1:22:00 PM
Simplistic, no wasted words, and (Sower of dreams) says it all.
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Silent One
Date: 12/28/2017 3:47:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 12/27/2017 11:02:00 PM
Fresh Rebirth, that's what its all about. Very Inspirational indeed, Si. So much in such a few words. Brilliant Monoku...Maria
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Silent One
Date: 12/28/2017 3:46:00 PM
Thank you Maria..
Date: 12/27/2017 10:55:00 PM
Dreams need hope to grow into fruition and your lovely monoku beautifully conveys the message, Silent One. Gorgeous imagery my friend. ~Susan
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Silent One
Date: 12/28/2017 3:45:00 PM
Thank you Susan..
Date: 12/27/2017 8:50:00 PM
My monoku was way too long; this is an awesome example Silent One!~Che :)
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Silent One
Date: 12/28/2017 3:44:00 PM
Thank you Che..
Date: 12/27/2017 8:36:00 PM
Thank you for the information, truly. I really like your line, well done. Happy New Year to you! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Silent One
Date: 12/28/2017 3:44:00 PM
Thank you CayCay..
Date: 12/27/2017 4:08:00 PM
great, love the shower of dreams...
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Silent One
Date: 12/27/2017 4:16:00 PM
Thank you Harry..
Date: 12/27/2017 3:25:00 PM
Well done S-1; this has the right attributes of a true monoku. Dreams are meant to flourish, and hope is ideal compost for them. Regards // paul
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Silent One
Date: 12/27/2017 4:26:00 PM
Thank you Paul, you are an expert in these, so I appreciate your feedback..
Date: 12/27/2017 2:15:00 PM
Fantastic! Think my leaves are falling too! I'm sowing new dreams, as new to P.S.
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Silent One
Date: 12/27/2017 4:27:00 PM
Good attitude to have.. Thank you Barbara..
Date: 12/27/2017 2:11:00 PM
Very nice monoku Silent, best wishes
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Silent One
Date: 12/27/2017 4:28:00 PM
Thank you Joseph..
Date: 12/27/2017 12:22:00 PM
Unique poem by a truly talented poet. Very Happy New Year. Best Wishes n Blessing always.
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Silent One
Date: 12/27/2017 4:29:00 PM
Thank you Anisha..
Date: 12/27/2017 10:32:00 AM
Nice... I don't know if I could write a very good poem in so few words.
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Silent One
Date: 12/27/2017 4:30:00 PM
Thank you, I am sure you could..
Date: 12/27/2017 10:06:00 AM
Based on your photo I think I will take up gardening. Beautifully expressed monoku. Good luck in the contest.
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Becca Teagan
Date: 12/27/2017 10:31:00 AM
LOL Rick :)
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Silent One
Date: 12/27/2017 10:13:00 AM
haha.... Well, it is always good to sow dreams.. Thanks Richard..
Date: 12/27/2017 6:31:00 AM
I like it...Maybe I'll try a Monoku too...All the best SO
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Silent One
Date: 12/27/2017 10:13:00 AM
I am sure you will master it.. Thank you..
Date: 12/27/2017 6:21:00 AM
Very deep Silent One..lovely metaphors..!
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Silent One
Date: 12/27/2017 6:22:00 AM
Thank you Vijay, hope to see a monoku from you soon..
Date: 12/27/2017 5:57:00 AM
Very nice, S1 - well-done! (And thanks for the info!)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/27/2017 10:30:00 PM
I apologize for the type-o.
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Silent One
Date: 12/27/2017 5:58:00 AM
Mice? What mice? Lol.. Thanks Greg..
Date: 12/27/2017 5:52:00 AM
Wow... A perfect example... Loved it...
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Silent One
Date: 12/27/2017 5:58:00 AM
Thank you Supraja..
Date: 12/27/2017 5:44:00 AM
Those human trees are beautiful yet nightmare... amazing dear Silent! Hugs and smiles :)
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Silent One
Date: 12/27/2017 5:59:00 AM
Indeed the can be... Thank you Kina..

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