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A Boy with a Black Eye Sits in the Park, Portrait of a Boy in a Cap ...

she seemed cute to me tee shirt said up for a hug so, I grabbed a hold the other side said it is good you didn’t try that’s why the black eye

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/7/2025 11:20:00 AM

A creative/fun write and picture. Love Both... Thanks for the laugh. I needed it... Guess next time you will just read the tee shirt. Hahaha!!! Have a fun day writing away..........

Bill Baker
Date: 8/7/2025 5:36:00 PM

Too young to think a message could be on both sides. Have a pleasant weekend, Paula. Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/6/2025 3:39:00 PM

that's pretty hilarious. I can actually see this happening to you as a boy. HA..hugs Sara

Bill Baker
Date: 8/6/2025 9:16:00 PM

I'd probably go for it. :-) Love, Bill