Huge Pie in the Sky

Huge pie in the sky,
visiting her grandparents.
A lofty and crusty bake
from ages ago.

The chill cellar held jars.
Fruits were homegrown,
handpicked, canned.

Humongous, it was not
an average-sized pie.

The gigantic pie, at least
to a child that remembers,
was gorged on satisfying
fat-purple-blueberries.

I can only imagine a taste,
to take a bite out of
1950’s life. My tongue
red and blue, savoring.

My memory only holds
my Great-Grandma
in a corner chair
in her daughter’s home;

and a couple visits
to our home
with her sister.
At least I remember that,

but paint me purple,
or let me go closer,
for her granddaughter
made me rhubarb pie.

That’s my mama,
whose Great-Grands
will only mostly recollect
what I surrender
from the past.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 9/8/2024 12:49:00 PM
This is a touching poem of sentimental memories.. I always remember the grapevines in my grandparents garden and some of the terminology my nanna used to use..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/8/2024 1:59:00 PM
Glad you thought so, Silent! Thank you for sharing your memory too!
Date: 9/7/2024 9:29:00 PM
This is the authentic 'American Pie!' ~ Don McLean
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/8/2024 6:08:00 AM
I rather like the old pie in the face routine ;) lol
Date: 9/7/2024 5:58:00 PM
Families were a lot closer back then; conversation, before the era of texting and email. Instead of Photoshop People actually did their own artwork. A hug meant something. Oh, I still love pies. Any kind.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2024 6:35:00 PM
Thanks, Joe! Lovely comment! :)
Date: 9/7/2024 3:15:00 PM
Childhood memories are stored in the heart. A fabulous job of capturing those memories in your poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2024 6:36:00 PM
Thank you, Alesia!
Date: 9/7/2024 2:39:00 PM
You made a deep and wonderful depiction of childhood memory- written in your lovely pen! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2024 6:36:00 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Date: 9/7/2024 10:36:00 AM
Beautiful tribute to gran... and blueberry pie. We're having a picnic with friends this afternoon and I'm told pie is on le menu...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2024 6:37:00 PM
Awesome! Hope you enjoyed!
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