Huge Pie in the Sky

Huge pie in the sky,
visiting her grandparents.
A lofty and crusty bake
from ages ago.

The chill cellar held jars.
Fruits were homegrown,
handpicked, canned.

Humongous, it was not
an average-sized pie.

The gigantic pie, at least
to a child that remembers,
was gorged on satisfying
fat-purple-blueberries.

I can only imagine a taste,
to take a bite out of
1950’s life. My tongue
red and blue, savoring.

My memory only holds
my Great-Grandma
in a corner chair
in her daughter’s home;

and a couple visits
to our home
with her sister.
At least I remember that,

but paint me purple,
or let me go closer,
for her granddaughter
made me rhubarb pie.

That’s my mama,
whose Great-Grands
will only mostly recollect
what I surrender
from the past.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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September 8, 2024 at 12:49 PM
This is a touching poem of sentimental memories.. I always remember the grapevines in my grandparents garden and some of the terminology my nanna used to use..
Rodrigues Avatar
September 8, 2024 at 1:59 PM
Glad you thought so, Silent! Thank you for sharing your memory too!
Wolf Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 9:29 PM
This is the authentic 'American Pie!' ~ Don McLean
Rodrigues Avatar
September 8, 2024 at 6:08 AM
I rather like the old pie in the face routine ;) lol
DiMino Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 5:58 PM
Families were a lot closer back then; conversation, before the era of texting and email. Instead of Photoshop People actually did their own artwork. A hug meant something. Oh, I still love pies. Any kind.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 6:35 PM
Thanks, Joe! Lovely comment! :)
Leach Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 3:15 PM
Childhood memories are stored in the heart. A fabulous job of capturing those memories in your poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 6:36 PM
Thank you, Alesia!
Hind Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 2:39 PM
You made a deep and wonderful depiction of childhood memory- written in your lovely pen! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 6:36 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
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