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Hug

I wish i could give her the life she dreams of, Wish i could love her the way she desrves but money can burn and love can die So i will try to be deserving of the love she gives and dream of the life i have Wrapped in my arms i look so furlong Always the nagging thought hammering nails through honey The time will come with no one to hug

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/1/2018 2:52:00 AM

This poem can be applied to a child going to college or a significant other. I had to really think while reading it, which is good. Thank you for an poem that excels expectations, and rather quickly.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/1/2018 2:42:00 AM

Awwww. This is poetic and sweet.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/1/2018 2:39:00 AM

The racing, raging feelings you meant to instill in this poem are in there fast and furious. I can feel your powerlessness, and pain, and I can feel you. I am trying to calm myself down, which is a testimony of you taking your power back by calling this out, rather than covering it up. Whether true or not, it does not matter. You are in control of this poem, and maybe it will help another and another and another write down their feelings and take their power back too. This poem is very much needed. Thank you. God bless you.

Christopher Quigley
Date: 5/1/2018 7:41:00 AM

Thank you

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/1/2018 2:31:00 AM

Aw.....love it that your realization of the fleetingness of life is guiding your hand right now. Try to be deserving of her love. Wow! I'm sure you are!

Christopher Quigley
Date: 5/1/2018 7:41:00 AM

Thank you