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A corner shop, a busy street your mother's hand, your dragging feet I can almost set the scene.......A messy rack of magazines, A barber pole, some shaving cream, and jars of greasy Brilliantine I try to picture you back then, How many barbers have there been? Your rosy cheeks, eyes shining bright, above the crisp white cloth so tight, around your neck. (You hated that!) A squirmy worm, but there you sat Your daddy waits to pay the bill Darn it, won't you please hold still?!! Today there's less to take off top Behind you, I have snipped and cropped My scissors fold and I must stop and for a moment I was there... and saw that small boy in the chair

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/30/2018 3:49:00 PM
Awe...such cute memories conveyed to us so well with your poetic creativity, Carrie! Love your poem...I remember times like this too...Congrats on your well-deserved Trophy win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/29/2018 2:01:00 PM
Fabulous memories Carrie I congratulate you on your top spot:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/27/2018 10:57:00 AM
So sweet, Carrie. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 5/24/2018 1:44:00 PM
Oh gee!! This brought tears for some reason. So well written, so real. Can see why #1. Congratulations. A fave.
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Date: 5/24/2018 7:58:00 AM
Wonderful ink Carrie! Oh just delightful. A fave. Congratulations on your fine trophy win!
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Date: 5/24/2018 7:50:00 AM
This is charming, Carrie, and deftly written. Congrats.
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Date: 5/24/2018 7:44:00 AM
I really LOVE this great WINNING poem, Carrie! Janice
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Date: 2/17/2010 5:42:00 PM
enjoyed, congrats on the win!
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Date: 2/6/2010 4:24:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie. I think everyone with sons has had this experience. The first time your baby becomes a little boy, lovely work...Margaret
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Date: 2/6/2010 3:47:00 PM
A sweet memory poem, Carrie. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/6/2010 2:53:00 PM
So preciuos a memory! Congrad's dear one! congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/6/2010 1:28:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem and placement in Mac's contest yesterday.. a wonderful write and win.. luv.. Linda-Marie.
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Date: 2/6/2010 11:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Mac's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2010 11:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your 3rd place win. Indeed a pleasure to read...and a return of forgotten memories. Mac
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Date: 3/7/2009 10:07:00 AM
Pleasant memory. A trip to the barber was one of my favorites when my boys were small. I came back once with 2 boot camp cuts and my wife was furious, but my kids were laughing and proud of their hairless heads. Vince
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Date: 3/4/2009 8:36:00 PM
This is such a lovely, nostalgic piece, Carrie. Very beautifully written! well done! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/4/2009 2:35:00 PM
Almost have me crying, Carrie ... smile ... what a beautiful tribute to a boy's haircut and I don't think I've seen that subject before here at the soup! Wonderful write ... you've really brought March in with a roar ... so many writes already ... LOL ...
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Date: 3/4/2009 11:07:00 AM
Hi Carrie... loads of memories come flooding back.... making me smile.. squirming and wiggling in that big chair.... great stuff Carrie.. loved it ! and thanks so much for the comment
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Date: 3/4/2009 7:14:00 AM
I have two sons and this reminds me so clearly of the times I've taken them to the barber, to see them again as little kids. Wonderful! Michael
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Date: 3/4/2009 5:39:00 AM
~lol~ You have a way of bringing magic and joy to every day simple things of life. Adorable write. Gotta love the line "...Now there's less to take off top..." Makes me smile! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/4/2009 12:42:00 AM
This takes me back to those short,back & sides styling Carrie.Nice work.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 3/3/2009 7:21:00 PM
Oh such precious memories you always muster up. I remember my granddad cutting my hair with hand operated clippers. Thanks for the memories. Blessings to you and your family, Ron
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Date: 3/3/2009 7:05:00 PM
Gosh I remember quite a few tears in the beginning and such sad faces, and terribly itchy until you would've thought they were dying. Fun stuff now
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Date: 3/3/2009 6:35:00 PM
You brought back some wonderful memories Carrie...Raul
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Date: 3/3/2009 3:01:00 PM
O, how could I resist, since my father prided himself a barber, with his bowl on my head and clippers doing there thing on my beautiful hair, is it no wonder that my hair stays long, now!! LOL - A keeper, Dear Carrie!!!! poet butterfly
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