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Hubby Having Hysterics Alliteration Contest

Parents pushing perambulators Meeting many mothers Coffee , cake and chat Babies bottles to boobs Hurry home to hubby Hubby holding hooter Nappy, not nice. Baby blowing bubbles Shower sex sleep Luxury, lazy lie-in Hubby having hysterics. Siana sick over Sean Cosy cwtch cancelled

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David Williams

Date: 3/18/2013 2:41:00 AM

Seren very good...

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/18/2013 4:27:00 AM

Thank you David ...Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/15/2013 4:09:00 AM

cool catchy and cosy, love it xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/16/2013 8:45:00 AM

Golly I hope they dont think I am married now.LOL ...Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2013 11:58:00 PM

this is really cool, Seren. I really like this one. loved bottles to boobs

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/15/2013 12:29:00 AM

Tried to think what the chat would be about lol. Quite liked doing that ......Seren

David Fisher

Date: 3/14/2013 1:47:00 PM

That's a good one...Alliterations sure seem difficult to write. Good luck!

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/14/2013 4:34:00 PM

no not once you get started, think up the first line the rest just follows....Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/14/2013 5:43:00 AM

This is an excellent alliteration Seren! It flowed so very well and the subject was displayed so masterfully...I caught on to it quickly and wonderfully! I enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! What a fun piece, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/14/2013 8:18:00 AM

thanks Russell when I got started found it ok to do ...Seren

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 3/14/2013 5:38:00 AM

hahaha. Hectic HouseHold. I enjoyed your alliteration. Good luck in the contest, Seren. You've got a winner here. :)

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/14/2013 8:17:00 AM

lol all in my imagination Delysia, think I have read too many Mills and Boons books....Seren