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How Wonderful Innocence Was

Passersby stared at me and complimented mom for her gorgeous child who smiled very tenderly, and being moved by how I sang my nursery rhyme, they applauded saying, " Oh, it's so pretty! " A few days ago, being bored I searched for a rare coin collection sold to me by the Bradford exchange, but surprisingly I found a forgotten picture between the pages of a book written by James McQueen, and in that picture there was me at a tender age. The more I looked at it, the more that shy and fair child resembled me, and being amazed by my discovery, I started living the thrill of childhood days: remembering spring afternoons and how wonderful innocence was! Written by Andrew Crisci for Deb Wilson's contest, " Maybe I'm Amazed! " 2/ 19/2013

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Date: 3/16/2013 8:09:00 PM
dt behooves us all to go back in memory to those wonderful, carefree, happy days when we were loved and had no worries. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/16/2013 1:14:00 PM
Nicely written Andrew. Congratulation on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/16/2013 12:43:00 PM
Andrew, CONGRATULATIONS in Deb's contest!!! ;-) always~ PD
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Date: 3/16/2013 10:12:00 AM
Memories can be so precious... Beautifully written poem... It touched me. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 3/16/2013 9:18:00 AM
How amazing are those little things, almost forgotten, then re-discovered! This one brought such a smile and a tender reflection on our own childish innocence..... if only we could keep some of it forever. Congratulations, Andrew!!
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