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How the echo filters reality Poetry Contest
sponsored by Dilly Dally  11/25/2024

It creeps up on me early morning and again late afternoon a microcephalic shadow, almost the length of a football pitch, Land of the giants view My childlike head is miles away and dwindling, constantly deflating Proteus syndrome echoes back through generations crossing time zones too Elongated diffraction casts a very long shadow, tapering reality Low sun dysmorphia projects a reflection of me, A filtered perspective revealing my only truth Those beans I threw away yesterday were not magic No golden goose lives atop the stalk just a grotesque shell, and one giant (yoke) flattening all potential I try look away but as always a grain of sand blocks my view Come chop me down, flinch as I fall Step over my shadow you’ll need (seven league boots) But most of all, no fixed roots!

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Date: 12/8/2024 11:47:00 PM
This is such an intriguing take dear DK, youv written one that made me pause and again reflect and digest what youv conveyed here on the theme, all is sometimes not as it seems on the other side, and i found your use of these lines so very clever “ No golden goose lives atop the stalk just a grotesque shell, and one giant (yoke) flattening all potential” what a unique wat of depicting what youv wanted to convey! You have unique ways with words. What we throw away or toss away yesterday may always not be all that, and sometimes time gets in the way and distorts our perspectives too! Like how youv mentioned here with grain of sand. Always a pleasure reading your work. Congratulations on your well deserved top win
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David Kavanagh
Date: 12/9/2024 5:42:00 AM
Thanks so much Ink, I was delighted with the win (shared) in Dilly’s contest indeed all is never as it seems, we can sometimes only be sure of our own perspective on reality, I’m delighted my little grain of sand caught your eye :) it seemed to fit perfectly how a shadow’s pov might be obscured, But hey you have your own unique approach on perspective, much more picturesque than I could ever portray, don’t let me distract you for a second! Cheers David
Date: 12/4/2024 9:43:00 PM
'tapering reality' 'step over my shadow... no fixed roots' your words hit like waves dear poet. congratulations on your win. cheers.
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Date: 12/5/2024 10:38:00 AM
Thanks so much Thriveni, was a very enjoyable and cathartic piece to write, trying to filter reality using echoes is my new hobby, cheers David
Date: 12/4/2024 8:38:00 AM
Oh, wow! This poem truly captures the very essence of the theme. It conveys a poignant struggle for self-acceptance amidst the distorted lens of reality. Congratulations on your top win. ^__^ JCB
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David Kavanagh
Date: 12/4/2024 9:57:00 AM
Thank you JCB, I definitely go along with your comment, so many distorted realities on self-acceptance out there, perhaps the filtered echo is the only one that brings them all into perspective, cheers David
Date: 12/4/2024 8:19:00 AM
Oh no trophy. Congratulations on your #1 winning echo poem, well-deserved!! A caring poet always generous with your support and encouragement.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 12/4/2024 9:48:00 AM
Ah trophy’s are overrated Anaya, the sponsor here certainly is not, means a lot to me to do well in Dilly’s contests, I’m a bit out of sorts at the moment, so this was a welcome surprise today, I hope to become that caring poet you mention, in the not so distant future, cheers David
Date: 12/4/2024 8:02:00 AM
The power of a great poem David - from the opening line I felt my breathing change as I was drawn in. The slowing down of time and the adding of weight. I enjoyed the references I knew but looked up for greater clarity. It's so accurately my intent with the prompt in terms of concept (as opposed to topic) that I'm currently considering whether I've imagined the whole thing. You'd be bookies favourite now too I imagine haha
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Date: 12/4/2024 9:40:00 AM
Woohoo! I took a bit of a gamble with this one Dilly, and it was quite a long shot lol! Once I seen your prompt a dysmorphic concept of the self emerged, was great to play around with shadows and echoes dilating through time, maybe this is my reality filtered on some level, thanks so much I am proud to be placed so highly amongst so many great entries in your mind boggling contest, cheers David
Date: 11/30/2024 9:18:00 AM
What shadows we trace, I'll need a pair of boots like those to come along this elongated journey. Reality-based on a congenital condition made for a brilliant perspective associate with a shadow in the mix of self-loathing and a bit of your Salvador Dali's piece I felt. Amazing, Cheers!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 11/30/2024 11:32:00 AM
Thanks Anaya, no better place to start loathing than with oneself, in this case expressed through a long dysmorphic shadow, that could well be congenital, or at least a childhood reflection, I’m sure Dalí would totally get it just like you do, cheers David
Date: 11/25/2024 11:21:00 PM
Sometimes we just don't see the woods for the trees, our minds can be so easily swayed. You rose well to the challenge David, good luck in the contest. Tom
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David Kavanagh
Date: 11/26/2024 2:53:00 AM
Good morning Tom I’ve been off kilter last few weeks, thanks so much for stopping by, yes we can be easily swayed depending on how our surroundings are at any given time in life, I’ve a lot of catching up to do on the soup, just popping in and out for now, cheers David
Date: 11/25/2024 1:13:00 PM
More than one read terrific! Love how the magic beans came into play. Love the perspective.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 11/25/2024 1:39:00 PM
Heya Kim, I’m delighted you seen the perspective on how reality can filter through our minds, sometimes depending on our mood, the bean stanza just seemed to magically materialise as I was writing this one lol! Cheers David
Date: 11/25/2024 1:07:00 PM
Love the take on the photo. Very kewl!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 11/25/2024 1:32:00 PM
Thanks, the photo came as an afterthought I needed something to share perspective with the poem, cheers David

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