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How Still the Trees

How still the trees outside my window,
Their autumn leaves are slick with rain.
Though summer's gone, sweet mem'ries linger
Of sun-streaked hair and lips of flame.
Faintly I hear hoar winter calling
As shorter now the days are falling,
But spring sleeps just around the corner
To waken in dew time again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kendrick Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 3:27 AM
I enjoyed reading this one. I like the play on the word dew in the last line. I am glad that I chose this one to read today. Sara
Slaughter Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 8:38 AM
Thank you, Sara. I'm delighted you made that choice, too.
Summers Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 3:51 PM
Great imagery and flow. “Of sun-streaked hair and lips of flame,”…good stuff. John
Slaughter Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 8:37 AM
John, many thanks for your gracious remarks.
Bauer Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 12:00 PM
Very lovely, Jim!
Slaughter Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 8:36 AM
Thank you, Ilene.
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