How Poetry Began

0ne Sunny day the angels sat, assembled on the clouds,
Some played harps, others sang, they all looked very proud.
A few were showing new wings, they’d just received that morn,
Others cuddled angel babies that had just been born.

Children jumping through the clouds, half flying they would run
A day like this in heaven, was made for having fun
Everywhere I seemed to look the clouds rang out for joy
Until I seen one little cloud with just one lonely boy.
 
The boy he held a paper and his feather was pure white
He sat there very serious as he would think, then write.
Dear child I asked what is it here that keeps you from the rest
He answered I am writing poems and want to do my best.

Poems I wondered, what is this? I knew not what he meant
The little man then read to me, he was such a little gent.
These words he read were different, yet somehow still the same
They rang out more like music, which seem to be his aim.

I wanted to help God out, when people are feeling sad
If they had poems they just might, read them and be glad.
The angel folded his paper, to earth he watched it glide
And made it float and gently land at a Wiseman side.

Now I asked, why did you send that paper down to earth?
He winked and said this is the day of poetry’s great birth.
That’s why we are all gathered here and celebrate this day
When humans discover poetry, to help them on their way.

Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
09.13.2014
For contest: How Poetry Began
Justin Bordner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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De Paz Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 7:46 AM
You are just as that little angel kid who invented poetry, Brenda. You should win the contest, in my opinion.Tke it as a prize!
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 9:06 AM
Thank you so much Mario and thanks for stopping by.
Yvonne Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 7:46 PM
very creative attack on this assignment. this is a great piece for children or any age. Excellent. Congratulations. I am the winner though, I got to read this wonderful gem.
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 8:20 PM
Ah Maurice that is so kind.
Curtis Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 5:05 PM
Brenda---think Kids Books -----if I had a kid and you had a book---I would would read it to them.
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 6:13 PM
I have written a couple Jerry, almost had one published once but almost doesn't count. Maybe someday. I was actually thinking this would make a good one. I am very flattered that you toe me this. Thanks a bunch. XXXXOOOO
Horsman Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 10:44 AM
and long live poetry, Brenda,,especially if it as good as this...
Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 11:36 PM
hey, I am glad to see this on the winners' list. Congrats to you. I wish he had been more generous with number placements!!
Onclaud Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 9:10 PM
this is so uplifting, Brenda.. sweet congrats
May Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 7:09 PM
Beautiful write Brenda....I loved the heavenly theme...Congrats on your win
Haick Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 6:29 PM
Brenda, I love this! You've created a beautiful imagery for the theme! I believe this is one for the winner's list.... I am sure! Thank you for visiting and reading "The Gift" I appreciate your kind comment too. Annalise
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 2:08 PM
wonderful take on the theme Brenda many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Kamoonpuri Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 1:54 PM
Cöngrats for dis fantastic jaunty cool poem written in adorable rhyme. Poetry frm heaven eh.
Yvonne Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 12:49 PM
A beautiful take. Congratulations on your win. lots of love
Kumankoma  Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 11:38 AM
Great write, Brenda. I gotta to add this to my favourite poems list. Thanks for visiting my page. hugs......Sarpong
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 12:24 PM
Thanks so much Sarpong.
Kendrick Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 6:39 AM
Creative thoughts about the birth of poetry..Reads like a winner ..Way to go ..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 12:25 PM
Thank you Sara.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 3:27 AM
A lovely entry for the contest Brenda!
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 12:25 PM
Thanks Connie for your comment and for dropping by.
Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 1:52 AM
gosh you made a real story about it. GREAT imagination you have. So fine!!!
Lindley Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 7:40 PM
So very fine and the conclusion is perfect. This is indeed a very fine poem!!
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 7:59 PM
Thanks so much Robert. I appreciate your visit.
Ebbs Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 4:41 PM
I like it, especially the last four lines, good job! :)
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 7:58 PM
Thanks for reading this and commenting Ed.
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