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each morn' I surrender my sins ... to God ... my heavenly father I pray for help to let go of all my fragmented past regrets and failures and help to live in his light ~ and when my days end in this earthly realm I shall shed this human form and my soul will float above like a sparkling light I will enter the gate ~ he knows I am not perfect but, he loves me just the same and forgives all for he holds my hand when I am afraid and carries me when I am broken he listens my soul will be light as a feather and I will spread my angel wings like a bird there will be nothing but peace and tranquility for my soul ~ for God has considered my cries and tears watched my good deeds done seen my compassion for others witnessed my kindness and seen my good and whispered ... bless you my child so, in my last breath I leave all pain behind and know only serenity ... I will open my souls gate to dwell everlasting with God in heaven ~ I will be a light shining in his high tower ever to be part of his heavenly realm ~ _________________ February 02, 2023 Poetry/FreeVerse/How Does The Soul Enter Heaven Copyright Protected, ID 02-1522-867-02 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, How Does The Soul Enter Heaven ? sponsor, Mystic Rose Rose, Judged 02/04/2023 Third Place

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Date: 2/6/2023 5:33:00 AM
Constance, I like your focus on the confession and ready forgiveness of sin by our Lord. We cannot comprehend what heaven will be like - we don't need to b/c it will be perfect like our Father planned from the beginning of time.
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Date: 2/6/2023 7:43:00 AM
Reason, thank you so much for the great comment, Constance
Date: 2/4/2023 8:17:00 PM
"my soul will be light as a feather and I will spread my angel wings like a bird there will be nothing but peace and tranquility for my soul "~ What a beautiful imagination dear Constance. I too visualize that once the soul is divested of the body, it will be light as feather and soar high into the Kingdom of Heaven! Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Date: 2/5/2023 12:34:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the nice comment, compliment and congratulations, Constance
Date: 2/4/2023 12:48:00 PM
You have risen to the challenge dear poet. When asked how does the soul enter heaven, you have searched your heart and given me a winner. Thanks for joining and congrats on your win. Warm regards :)
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Date: 2/5/2023 12:35:00 AM
Mystic, thank you so much for the contest and my placement, and for the compliment, comment and congrats, Constance
Date: 2/4/2023 6:14:00 AM
In Truth of Jesus there is no death, just a Change God bless this posting.
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Date: 2/4/2023 6:37:00 AM
Joe, thank you so much for the visit, yours words are truth, Constance
Date: 2/3/2023 5:57:00 AM
Constance, you have painted such beautiful pictures with your poems and the settings that you have described. You have, as usual, done a wonderful job expressing your individual perspective on paradise after death and the hope that you have for it.
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Date: 2/3/2023 5:06:00 PM
Sotto, thank you so much for the compliment, and nice comment ,Constance
Date: 2/3/2023 12:18:00 AM
Very beautiful, Constance:) hope this places high:)
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Date: 2/3/2023 5:06:00 PM
Jo, thank you so much for the compliment and encouragement, Constance
Date: 2/2/2023 3:30:00 PM
Amen, lovely inspiring poem , can we go now : )
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Date: 2/3/2023 5:07:00 PM
Stephan, thank you so much for the compliment, and comment, Constance

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