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How do you feel when you look to the skies..? the cumulus inspired your innocent imagination with playful marshmallow fantasies — the sun peeked from behind peony-puffs of airy white to admire the flounce and frill of your yellow sundress — in the morning of your youth you felt buoyant by the age of your afternoon you basked in the warmth of the sun at its peak golden the glow and short the shadows though heaped nimbus clouds hugged your horizons.. heavy the rain and hard the hail as lightning's lance pierced the heart of the day... your refuge the bold shield of the roof you built — you felt tried.. but tenderly triumphant! like a cosmic tear rolled down upon the hills the paunchy sun puddles on the dark edge of Earth a last languid look at an old friend before the spill and burn behind the rim - the sweep of cirrus serene and cerise filled with embers of dreams and prayers and wishes at peace — in the elder moments of your evening hour the sun sets as the evening raises its silver torch how do you feel when you look to the skies..? —a satisfied soul smiles Susan Ashley January 23, 2023 ~ Fifth Place ~ Premiere Contest: Contest NO 1180 Sponsor: Brian Strand ~ Third Place ~ Premiere Contest: How Do You Feel Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 12/11/2023 9:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your high finishes in the two contests, Suze. Another wonderful poem with beautiful imagery. The way you dealt with different parts of the day was very creative. I missed these poems because this was when Sara had her shoulder surgery, and I was taking care of her. Little time to read and comment on poetry. But I found these few I'd missed and have enjoyed reading your poetry today, my dear friend. Blessings, Bill
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Date: 12/22/2023 8:22:00 AM
Dear Bill, please forgive my late reply to your beautiful comments. Life has been overflowing the brim with all things good, keeping me busy and away from the computer. Thank you for sharing your treasured thoughts with me. Yes, I seem to remember when Sara had her shoulder surgery, you were busy for sure. So glad to receive your wonderful feedback and kind congrats, my friend. Warmest wishes to you and Sara for a happy Holiday season filled with peace and joy.. ~Suze
Date: 7/29/2023 3:14:00 AM
Good Morning Susan. This entry was well thought out in all aspects and elements including imagery and emotion for both are present. Imagery and Emotion are always alive when looking to the sky. Thank you for sharing your skilled poetic talent. Have a wonderful morning and weekend. Take Care (smile)
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Date: 7/29/2023 12:20:00 PM
Dear Lisa, it is both an honor and a thrill to receive your thoughtful comments so ripe with beauty and insight. Both your soulful poetic spirit and warm friendship are appreciated. Thank you, my poet friend, for gracing me and my poem with your light and joy. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 4/8/2023 2:36:00 AM
Hi Susan my dearest friend, a deep write - 3 eras of ones life revealed and expressed as the morning, afternoon and evening of life, intense and poignant indeed. I hope your Easter is blessed, peaceful and happy celebrating it with your loving family, our Greek Orthodox Easter is next weekend as we go according to the Julian Calendar. How i wish we could visit and and share our thoughts and enjoy each others company. Be well and blessed always my sweet sis.. Hugs and lots of love Jennifer.
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Date: 4/21/2023 6:49:00 AM
My dearest Jennifer, indeed, as one gets older one realizes how much "life" is like a day. With each part of the day unique in its way, growing and evolving with the path of the sun, peaking then receding.. and going by just as fast as a day it seems! My sweet sister, we enjoyed a happy Easter season and I just know you and your family did too! I feel you are truly enjoying your new granddaughter and I'm so thrilled for you! Please accept my apologies for the delay in my response to your beautiful comments. Life has been full and overflowing the brim in wonderful ways these days.. we are truly blessed! Your visit and uplifting presence is cherished.. indeed, it would be grand to enjoy each other's company over a cup of tea :) My warmest wishes, love and hugs sent across the many miles to find you, my sweet sis.. ~Susan
Date: 4/2/2023 1:28:00 PM
From now on I shall look at the sky and think of Susan and her faithful muse! Together they turn simple (and not so simple) words into profound poetry. Always a pleasure to stop and read your offerings, my friend. ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul
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Date: 4/21/2023 6:33:00 AM
Dear Paul, I am thrill to know that the vast expanse of the sky will hold these thoughts for you. Thank you for beholding the skies, and the fascination they offer, with me and my muse :) Your visits and uplifting words are always cherished! Please accept my apologies for the delay in my response to your lovely comments. Life has been full and overflowing the brim in many wonderful ways these days. Warmest wishes and hugs my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 2/21/2023 2:39:00 PM
Nice piece . We look into the skies to make positive wishes and also pray to our maker. I really like how you went about the poem . Keep it up.
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Date: 2/23/2023 8:56:00 AM
Dear Derek, thank you for your thoughtful comments, they are lovely and uplifting. Your gracious visit is truly appreciated. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 2/12/2023 9:55:00 AM
Fantastic, Susan!! Congrats times two.
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Date: 2/13/2023 8:54:00 PM
Thank you, dear Andrea, for your heartwarming words and kind congrats times two :) Your gracious visit is so appreciated. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 2/5/2023 3:42:00 AM
Congratulations, two contests, two wins.
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Date: 2/5/2023 8:15:00 AM
Dear Victor, thank you for your inspiring presence. Your return visit and heartwarming congrats are truly appreciated. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 2/4/2023 10:59:00 AM
- Congratulations ... so beautifully described, Susan - hugs
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Date: 2/4/2023 6:49:00 PM
Dear Anne-Lise, thank you! Both your wonderful comment and kind congrats are received with a grateful heart. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 2/4/2023 10:11:00 AM
A huge CONGRATS on your well-deserved win with this vividly descriptive spiritual piece, Susan! Janice
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Date: 2/4/2023 6:48:00 PM
Dear Janice, thank you for your lovely comment and kind congrats. Both are received with gratitude, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 2/4/2023 8:47:00 AM
Susan, your win is well-deserved. Pure wisdom, elegantly and eloquently articulated in your lines. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/4/2023 8:52:00 AM
Dear Lasaad, the beauty of your words shine upon my heart. Thank you for your lovely comments and kind congrats, it is an honor to receive such precious sentiments. Warmest wishes, my dear friend.. ~Susan
Date: 1/28/2023 7:48:00 AM
Hi Susan, my dearest poetry sis, a gem of note from a nib of wisdom - whip the two and you will find Poetess Susan Ashley., who artistically, eloquently and tastefully created this and many, many other poems and we the readers are the privileged ones that have access to them through our Poetry Soup Group. wonderful write dear friend. Good luck in the contest dear Susan. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/29/2023 9:10:00 AM
Dearest Jennifer, my sweet poetry sister, I am so very humbled and honored by your beautiful heart and uplifting words. I hold both your shining friendship and eloquent poetry in the depths of my appreciation. I am lifted up by your elating and inspiring wings! You are a sweet angel and I am so fortunate to call you my darling friend and cherished poetry sister. Thank you for sharing your heart with me, I am deeply touched by your endearing words. Warmest wishes and blessing sent across the many miles to where you are, dearest Jen.. ~Susan
Date: 1/28/2023 6:41:00 AM
Ah, Susan, as always, your words are exquisitely beautiful. Love the last line x
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Date: 1/29/2023 8:55:00 AM
Dear Jack, the warmth of your genuine heart if felt across the many miles. Thank you for the joy your visit brings and for the touching beauty your inspiring thoughts. Your friendship is treasured! Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 1/27/2023 10:37:00 AM
Good question Susan, especially as it goes on to make wondrous poetry, love it all...Harry
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Date: 1/29/2023 8:51:00 AM
Dear Harry, it's so wonderful to see you back! So glad you're feeling better. Your shining presence means the world to me and to so many poets here, my friend. Thank you for your lovely appreciation of my poem, your thoughts are treasured. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 1/26/2023 4:25:00 AM
Your poetry is as gorgeous as that evening star raising its silver torch. Every word, every sentence, everything about this...is simply beautiful, Susan. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Warmest wishes.. hugs Charlie :)
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Date: 1/26/2023 7:11:00 PM
Dear Charlie, my wonderful friend, the genuine feeling of your beautiful comments and kind congrats touch me deeply. Thank you, for your time spent with my poem and for sharing your treasured thoughts with me. I delight in your visits always. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
Date: 1/25/2023 11:12:00 AM
Susan you have cleverly taken us through the years of our life and reflected maturing perspectives that through lifes experiences lead us to see things differently based on our experiences, trials, and surroundings. Loved how you thoughtfully wrote this Susan. Your creativeness shines in this well thought piece. Big congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 1/26/2023 7:09:00 PM
Dear Michael, I truly appreciate your gracious visit and heartwarming response to my poem. Thank you for sharing in the emotions of this piece with me and for your kind congrats, I am both humbled and honored, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 1/24/2023 11:25:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, delightful and delighting from the start till the end. God bless you.
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Date: 1/26/2023 7:08:00 PM
Dear Beata, thank you! Both your wonderful comments and kind congrats are received with a humble and grateful heart. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 1/24/2023 7:18:00 PM
"playful marshmallow fantasies", "heaped nimbus clouds", "binge of lightning and blast of thunder" - Very many symbols and images are brought out to express immense and intense feelings. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/26/2023 7:04:00 PM
Dear Christuraj, thank you for embracing the emotions of my poem. Your precious thoughts and kind congrats are elating and received with gratitude. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 1/24/2023 11:46:00 AM
Susan, you have written some wonderful poetry with a lot of great thoughts throughout. Your eloquent metaphors came to life in your writing, and your easy grace and stunning beauty shone through. A fave for its high quality.
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Date: 1/26/2023 6:59:00 PM
Dear Lasaad, your wonderful presence here is uplifting. Thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts with me, I am humbled by your generous appraisal of my poem. Your friendship is cherished as is the honor of your fave. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 1/24/2023 11:03:00 AM
How do you feel I dared ask? You unloosed your soul and gave me just that. I felt the power of your answer, dear poet/poetess. Thank you for joining my contest, congrats and God bless !
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Date: 1/26/2023 6:54:00 PM
Dear Rose, I'm so pleased you found my poem worthy to share the podium with the gifted poets on your list. It is indeed an honor that I truly cherish. Thank you for sharing in the emotions of this piece with me and for your kind congrats. Your sponsorship is truly appreciated. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 1/24/2023 6:26:00 AM
Beautiful vibes throughout Susan. Enjoyed your description that bring alive the images.
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Date: 1/26/2023 6:51:00 PM
Dear Vijay, your thoughtful words warm my heart. Thank you for your time spent with my poem. Your wonderful visits are so very appreciated. Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
Date: 1/23/2023 11:01:00 PM
Incredibly beautiful in its metaphoric descriptions. A lifetime compared to a day is truly enchanting. You are a great poet with great imagery depicting your life span. Best for a win, you truly deserve it.
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Date: 1/26/2023 6:49:00 PM
Dear Victor, your embrace of my poem fills me with gratitude. Thank you for gracing my poem with your beautiful comments. I am both uplifted and humbled by your precious thoughts. I treasure your friendship and poetry, both of which are heartwarming and inspiring. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 1/23/2023 10:30:00 PM
The vibrant nurturing of nature as the articulate resolves a momentous stretch. Remarkable touches of your revelation, Susan, --all the best, Aloha William
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Date: 1/26/2023 6:44:00 PM
Dear William, thank you! Both your gracious visit and wonderful comments and are received with a humble and grateful heart. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 1/23/2023 10:02:00 PM
Wow! I loved every line of this glorious poem, Susan. It is in my faves. My very best wishes for the contest. Evelyn
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Date: 1/26/2023 6:42:00 PM
Dearest Evelyn, thank you for your embrace of my poem. I am enchanted by your presence and by your beautiful thoughts, my friend. So thrilled to know you enjoyed my poem and I am truly honored by your fave. Your friendship is cherished. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 1/23/2023 9:25:00 PM
"though heaped nimbus clouds hugged your horizons../ heavy the rain and hard the hail/ but in the binge of lightning and blast of thunder/ you found refuge beneath the roof you built —" What wonderful lines. So profound.... dear Susan. This is class poetry....! The changes time has wrought on one's attitude and outlook in innocent childhood, youth, middle age and the closing years of life are so beautifully captured. In the evening looking at the sky, if one can still smile, he is indeed a satisfied soul.
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Date: 1/26/2023 6:40:00 PM
Dear Valsa, it's so wonderful to see you! Thank you for your beautiful comments. Indeed, I relish your thoughtful words, they are heartwarming, especially since I hold your elegant poetry in such high regard. Your gracious presence here is ever appreciated, my sweet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 1/23/2023 8:58:00 PM
Wow, this is amazing and beautiful. We do perceive things differently through the changing seasons of life. I love how you shared such through your beautiful pen!
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Date: 1/24/2023 4:43:00 PM
Dear BJ, it is such a joy to receive your beautiful comments. Indeed, our perceptions about things do change as we gain knowledge and experience in life and mellow out.. Thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts with me, they are truly appreciated, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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