How do I write a love poem-POTD

When I see a beauty, a vision divine,
Love songs within me start to entwine.
Her face, a garden of blossoms in bloom,
Each petal a verse, dispelling gloom.

Her smile, a fragrance, jasmine sweet,
Enveloping senses in a fragrant retreat.
Her hair, a river, flowing so free,
In waves of grace, an enchanting spree.

Her eyes, like butterflies, dancing with light,
Captivating gazes, a mesmerizing sight.
But if my admiration goes unnoticed, alas,
Lonely songs I'll sing, hoping she'll pass.

Yet if still she remains in her distant sphere,
No desperation, for love draws near.
I'll wait for another inspiration to flow,
For in the river of time, love will grow.
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April 22, 2024 at 5:56 AM
Belated Congrats Jay on your POTD for your wonderful poem of love! Debx
Grieves Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 11:37 PM
A love poem always comes from the heart. Well done on Poem of the Day, Jay. Blessings this Easter.
Nicole Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 7:21 PM
' a garden of blossoms, each petal a verse. ' This is so beautiful and romantic. Poetic whispers is a beautiful way to express emotions within. * The soft touch of love * Your thoughts leave me in awe. Congratulations Jay, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy
Bowring Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 2:11 PM
Many congratulations Jay with POTD. This is such a beautiful love poem. Such exquisite lines, ‘ Her face, a garden of blossoms in bloom ‘ ‘ Her eyes like butterflies, dancing with light’- love those lines especially. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. :):)
Pandit Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 11:23 AM
BIG congrats on POTD, Jay. A beautiful poem on love and longing. Well done!
Baker Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 10:41 AM
Lovely romantic love poetry, Jay. Congratulations on your POTD honor, my friend! Enjoy your special day of recognition! Bill
Gorelick Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 9:54 AM
Objects of infatuous desires may come and go but love's eternal light shall always abide. Congratulations to you Jay on POTD! Robert
Fowler Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 9:31 AM
Awww Jay, this poem is a "divine vision", romantic write with great rhythm and rhyme! Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
Volumes Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 9:19 AM
Such a wonderful proclamation of pure love. Jay this is truly beautiful. So impressed I read it twice. A well deserved POTD. Congratulations, my friend.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 8:32 AM
Congratulate on your POTD win. WOW!!! A wonderful love poem. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.................
Anaya Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 8:06 AM
A love poem just like this captures her divine essence and his longing, with rhymes and flow just right. Congratulations on POTD Jay Narain! hugs~Anaya
Andresen Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 8:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Jay :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d, well deserved :) - hugs
Roper Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 7:54 AM
Very romantic with great imagery, Jay. Congratulations on POTD.
Jones Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 6:45 AM
Aw such a tender romantic write! Congratulations on potd!
May Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 6:40 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD
Rodgers Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 4:36 AM
Dear Jay, your poem is pure magic! Your imagery creates a wonderful portrait of love's longing and beauty. No wonder it's the Poem of the Day! Your words capture the essence of love's dance with such grace. Keep writing those verses; they are touching. Congratulations! - Blessings, my friend, Daniel
Kitchin Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 3:46 AM
Jay, beautifully romantic, congratulations on POTD.
Seeker Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 2:55 AM
Superbo! Congratulations on POTD, Jay, simply sublime
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 11:25 PM
One of your best yet, Jay. A fave
Bhattacharjee Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 9:45 AM
Beautifully penned!! There's longing echoing in the lines.
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