How do I attain Consciousness

I reach for the horizon of awareness,
A distant sun just beyond my grasp,
I stand at the shore of this vast ocean,
Ready to wade into its depths,
Unsure of how far the tides will carry me.

First, I must still the winds of my mind,
I close my eyes, and a storm of thoughts swirls,
If I could catch just one drifting leaf,
I might find the gateway to the infinite sky.

Next, I surrender to the night’s embrace,
To fall asleep with a mind like a placid lake,
No ripples of thought to disturb its surface,
Half-awake, I float through misty dreams,
Echoes of desires yet to be fulfilled.

The third step, perhaps a posture of grace,
To bend and breathe in harmony with the earth,
To let my spirit rise like morning mist,
Touching a realm where all is serene,
Only to fade as daylight returns.

I drink from the wisdom of sages and saints,
Their words flow like rivers, soothing but fleeting,
Perhaps I should journey to the valley of compassion,
Lend a hand to a fellow traveler on this road,
Maybe then, the path to consciousness will reveal itself.
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Andresen Avatar
February 24, 2025 at 10:24 AM
- A broadened understanding of reality, Jay - hugs
George Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 9:32 PM
The steps to Consciousness is so beautifully delineated in successive sequence. In the journey to consciousness, if we can lend a helping hand to a fellow traveler, our destination can be easily reached. Beautiful poem, Jay ji. Into my FAVE.
Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 11:23 AM
This is really cool. I know personification is when we give human attributes to nature. I wonder what we call giving nature's characteristics to ourselves!
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