Jan Allison Poet Limerick

How Could I Resist This Challenge

Little Susie had peed her new pants
Such an unfortunate circumstance
In front of her mother
She blushed a red colour …
then invented the wet knickers dance!




I used the poetry soup word generator and it came up with the word  ‘urination’ … now how could I resist THAT challenge!!!

(In the UK pants and knickers are what are known as panties in the US)

26th January 2016

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Arthur Vaso January 28, 2016 at 10:10 PM LOL this had me peeing my pants!!! Jan Allison January 29, 2016 at 7:55 AM Ha Ha Arthur - hope you get to read the updated version written with Rob Bettridge lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Duke Beaufort January 28, 2016 at 1:15 PM OMG--just too funny. Unfortunate for Susie since she'll have to remember this for some time. Jan Allison January 28, 2016 at 1:20 PM Lol Duke I love writing limericks and have teamed up with Rob Bettridge on a few recent writes and the humour is flowing:-) hugs Jan xx

Rob Bettridge January 27, 2016 at 1:17 PM How could 'I' resist this challenge as well......Here we go again..... I've emailed you some verses that you can add to. Jan Allison January 27, 2016 at 1:23 PM I get the feeling another collaboration is on the go lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Manny Paras January 27, 2016 at 12:46 PM She created a wiggling jig; this is funny, what you did!Fine by me. Jan Allison January 27, 2016 at 1:24 PM Thanks Manny:-) hugs Jan xx

White Sage January 27, 2016 at 8:58 AM nice write Jan, well written limerick Jan Allison January 27, 2016 at 1:24 PM Thanks so much White sage:-) hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet January 27, 2016 at 8:34 AM Good little ditty with a whimsical feel and good beat that creates a smile in the reading . Emile. Jan Allison January 27, 2016 at 1:25 PM Thanks Emile:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley January 27, 2016 at 6:39 AM ps- I've just used the word generator and it came back with 'symptomatology'. Doh! Jan Allison January 27, 2016 at 1:25 PM oh now that is a challenge for you lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley January 27, 2016 at 6:36 AM I don't know, Jan, airing dirty laundry in public..... a fun result, I may have to see what it comes up with myself, I'm short on inspiration at the mo. Viv x Jan Allison January 27, 2016 at 1:26 PM I know the feeling Viv - I can't force writing I go with the flow of my temperamental muse:-( hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus January 27, 2016 at 5:42 AM Very good and witty, Jan! This form is becoming one of your favourite tools, and you are using it with ease. Hugs // paul Jan Allison January 27, 2016 at 1:26 PM Thanks Paul I love writing with humour and so enjoy the limerick form:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong January 27, 2016 at 1:19 AM PERFECT! I loved this Jan! #7 Jan Allison January 27, 2016 at 1:27 PM Aww thanks Connie:-) hugs Jan xx

David Fisher January 26, 2016 at 8:18 PM Good one, Jan. Is this your sister Susie from other Limericks?(I think you used Susie) Jan Allison January 27, 2016 at 1:28 PM I don't have a sister Susie ... if I did she may sue me for libel lol I just like the alliteration of the name:-) hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie January 26, 2016 at 5:08 PM pants, knickers or panties....they are a favorite in my pantry....because when I look for dessert....sweet lips always work....the taste of woman is sweeter than fantasy....very cute jan....irresistible....;) Jan Allison January 26, 2016 at 5:48 PM lol thanks Eric:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich January 26, 2016 at 3:49 PM haha. Good one, Jan. your meter is great here too!! Jan Allison January 26, 2016 at 4:16 PM Thanks Andrea just a fun write - I couldn't resist it when that word came up lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith January 26, 2016 at 3:09 PM lol....nice...now I'm tempted to try one...maybe : ) Jan Allison January 26, 2016 at 3:10 PM oh go on Tim lol :-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen January 26, 2016 at 3:06 PM - "apple knickers" was used in ancient times - A good and fun limerick, Jan :)) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison January 26, 2016 at 3:09 PM Oh I've never heard that term before lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Wilfred Aniagyei January 26, 2016 at 2:55 PM Hahaha! Nice one, Jan.... Cool title too... Well done!! Jan Allison January 26, 2016 at 2:57 PM I couldn't resist Wilfred lol:-) hugs Jan xx