How To Live Forever

HOW TO LIVE FOREVER

When you look into your daughter’s brown eyes 
And see  the eyes of your own mother long gone
But  still smiling there,   and understand that she
Too will hear  something of you in her own son’s sighs;

When you pass a bearded hobo in a thunderstorm
Standing on the bridge and in a flash you see that the world 
Is filled with such people, and that Christ himself 
Also stood like that on the road to  Jerusalem;

When you hear a nightingale and marvel as you realize 
That all nightingales have sung the same song 
From time immemorial;
Or see a butterfly and admire its colors  just as 

Roman soldiers did before battle for Rome’s fame; 
And know that your daughter’s daughter will chase 
Almost the same butterfly around some 
Future garden, almost the same;

When time ceases to have meaning  for you
Because you realize instinctively that you see and feel
All the same experiences people have always felt :
Then,  with the universe you become one and true  -
 
And you live forever.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 9/5/2012 5:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Any Poem" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/4/2012 6:12:00 PM
SIDNEY, A LATE CONGRATS ON MY ANY POEM GOES CONTEST... CHEERS.. SKAT
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Date: 9/2/2012 5:11:00 PM
Syd, I wasn't expecting the second stanza to be spiritual and it blew me away with the powerful image of our father...this is outstanding work by you...I truly see Christ in you through your work here! This is numero uno in my book too! blessings, gwendolen
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Date: 9/2/2012 4:04:00 PM
Such a thoughtful person! Good writting Syd glad to see you numero uno AGAIN! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 9/2/2012 9:28:00 AM
oh lovely! a well deserved win i'd say!
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Date: 9/1/2012 12:03:00 PM
SIDNEY, congrats on your nice little win,, always~PD
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Date: 9/1/2012 6:38:00 AM
Lovely Sid and well worth this winning spot congratulations xx
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Date: 8/31/2012 11:51:00 PM
Wow!! Certainly deserving of a first prize. Congratulations on your win, Sidney. Good poetry, my friend. :)
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Date: 8/31/2012 1:55:00 PM
I liked this before and I still like it. Congratulations on your top place win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/31/2012 1:36:00 PM
I agree with your premise that living forever is in our children andour wortds and deeds to others. Congratulations.
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Date: 3/1/2012 9:05:00 AM
Hey Sidney. I just found this and feel like going back and grabbing mine and trashing it. Love your poem and its concept. I am predicting a top winner here. Love, Joyce
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Sidney Beck
Date: 3/1/2012 1:21:00 PM
Joyce, Thank you for your generous comment....I certainly wish you were one of the judges ! ! As a matter of fact the poem came to me rather easily ( as some poems do I'm sure you know) and it states pretty much the truth of my own feelings about what "living forever" actually means...best wishes always.....Syd
Date: 2/15/2012 3:14:00 PM
this is amazing. All I can say is FAVE.
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Sidney Beck
Date: 2/16/2012 7:51:00 AM
Andrea, I am always honored when you like my drivel....thanks sincerely......Syd
Date: 2/15/2012 8:49:00 AM
Jesus is the only way by which we can live FOREVER! Enjoyed. PETER ADELAKUN
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Date: 2/14/2012 2:49:00 AM
Mabye we live forever,but not on this place???Lovely poem Sidny,well done. - oxox love from Anne-Lise
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