House For Sale

I have heard they will roam the room at night Two shadows......against the moonlit wall A figment, and yet.... a haunting call?.... And then a silence blankets all She wanders in a gown of old Reflected in the dark, dark room, The night is black, the air is cold A bleached white face reflects the moon He hovers in the shadowed maze... Hair's on neck and arms will raise....... Some think the past has come again A step from the past, on creaking wood Borne of the two who hadn't lived A board or two will bend the floor.... A twisted branch taps at the sill A howling of the wind reveals another night when both were killed Then nothing more.... My whispered name I sometimes hear And all through the house, I feel them stare When dawn awakes, they slip through cracks Morning finds no clues, nor facts They vanish as if in thinnest air, but no one knows just where..... "HOUSE FOR SALE" beware!!
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Kimathi Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 7:48 AM
A very eerie piece indeed! I could see the imagery like that of a clip from a horror movie.... Congratulations for your win and placcement Carrie!
Yaseen Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 4:32 AM
congrats for your numero Uno win dear.. Hugs,, Malik
Watkins Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 9:45 PM
Very nicely crafted. I enjoyed the hint of a story here. You left enough of a mystery to make me want to reread it! Congratulations.
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 4:34 PM
Congratulations on your top winning for this chilling tale.
Halliday Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 10:47 AM
Classily done. Congratulations on a well-deserved first place. Mark
Allison Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 9:05 AM
ooh i got goosebumps reading this Carrie:-) many congrats on your top spot:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Nance Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 7:50 AM
Chilling! Grats on your top win! :)
Yvonne Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 6:53 AM
CONGRATULATIONS Carrie on your first place win. This is a great write and worthy. The ending is chilling.
A. Sharma Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 11:37 PM
Infact I wud luv to purchase this one n have an actual feel certainly!
A. Sharma Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 11:17 PM
Oh wow Carrie! Real dark n scary! Congrats on top win!
Konos Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 1:58 PM
You did it Carrie....GooseBumps personified....wow....
Dillard Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 9:12 PM
Beware indeed! This is a fluid and captivating read! Very nice! RAY
Sister Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 8:45 PM
Cute, I'm not going to buy this one, lol j
A   Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 6:17 PM
I like the roaming rumor you hear. Carrie, this is an awesome entry.. very gripping~ Congratulations in Seren's "what lurks within" contest. Always~ LINDA
Lamoureux Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 6:07 PM
This is great and the forsake part at the end was the cherry on top.
Roberts Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 5:30 PM
congratulations Carrie....Seren
Brown Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 1:36 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the "Unease" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 5:49 AM
Carrie congrats on your win..I love haunted places..David
A   Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 9:41 PM
CARRIE, congratulations with your wonderful win in Paula's unease contest..goodnight *PD
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 8:21 PM
I love this spooky write, Carrie! Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Johnson Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 6:19 PM
Exciting and scary and much unease. Congratulations Carrie. Love, Joyce
Grisetti Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 3:18 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem.
Dietrich Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 2:22 PM
awesome haunting tone in this one, Carrie. Way to do the contest and congrats on your win.
Freeman Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 9:57 AM
Carrie, Hey awesome, hairs standing up on the back of my neck. Excellent content in this magnificent gem in support of my contest. Congratulations, with this gem, thanks for entering it. Agape, Moses
Haick Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 6:11 PM
Dear Carrie, my warm congratulations on your win in the contest! Great job! Peace, love, audrey
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