House

(H)olds memories, is a safe place, and could be an (O)asis on earth when it’s filled with much love, (U)nderstanding , and respect for one another (S)o one can go out and spread love and joy to (E)veryone, no matter, their color or gender

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/10/2023 5:32:00 AM

Alexis my lovely true friend through thick and thin. If i don't answer you for a month or two you will still send me a comment We met on soup quite a few years ago and you have been a darling ever since then. This acrostic is a great reminder of how members should be within a home. Hope you are well. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/20/2023 2:31:00 PM

your acrostic is just perfect Alexis, there is no place like home:-) hugs Jan xx

Stephan McBride

Date: 10/16/2023 1:57:00 PM

Love it, this is beautiful should be hung up on every door way , and within one to remember: )

Karen Jones

Date: 10/16/2023 10:16:00 AM

Love this warm house acrostic poem. Hugs

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 10/15/2023 10:03:00 PM

Much sense... Home for all people. Well said Alexis

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/6/2023 9:10:00 PM

Deeply moving poem that flows smoothly, Alexis. Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2023 9:01:00 AM

I would say you got that right. A house needs to be a home

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/5/2023 6:25:00 AM

Perfectly written Alexis :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/4/2023 9:35:00 AM

nicely done, Acrostic, Alexis. You've captured the essence of both a house and a home. enjoy your day

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/4/2023 2:13:00 AM

House could be a home like that, but it can also go in so many different ways of dysfunction. I hope your home was like that when growing up and the one in which you now live is also. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/3/2023 12:59:00 PM

- A house ... a home ... filled with love ... lovely written, Alexis :) - hugs

Sam Scott
Date: 10/3/2023 2:32:00 PM

100% agree, Anne-Lise :)