Hours

Some hours race by at breakneck speed,
So fast they’re almost blurry,
As if, like fire trucks on call,
They’re in the biggest hurry.

While other hours move like snails
Or just like taffy, stretching,
Until we’re forced to check the clock
To try to keep from kvetching.*

Still, time is not in our control.
We lack the needed powers
To change the pace as minutes
Dash or crawl and turn to hours.

*complaining
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Leffanta Avatar
November 19, 2022 at 10:11 AM
Time does seem to speed by as one ages, except at night . . . .Enjoyed your rhymes, Ilene! Aloha!
Hankins Avatar
November 18, 2022 at 1:28 PM
So, true, Ilene. I think it has something to do with our anxiety level, eh? If we're really excited about something coming, the time seems to slow down. On the other hand, the opposite seems to be true. I don't know.
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