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Hot Summer Love

Clear eyes stargaze on sun-kissed days ~ Barley autumn, bosoms ablaze. Warm breeze brush bathing heavens, rainbow hues fusing chase and tease Whispers ~ touch spirit lips, rising heat cocoons blushing nymph. Kites sky flight tickling blue clouds, surfing glides breathtaking stunts. Nonstop beats, hormones flush, spiraling awesome thrilling release! Old boy, ebbing energy, please bounce back accompany me... Birds playing sweet symphonic tune, cunning beau shows sultry actions. Running torrid wild lustful tokens caress peaks fast and vast Tonic willpower, how will I have golden sunbeams hopes? Heart, listen, you fire in rush ~ don't you hurry, stay low and calm. As torments waves each passing year, eases control for you and me. Oh, if I took your lead, heart, I would hate many men now. (c) Olive Eloisa 12:31 am June 09, 2014 CONTEST: SIJO STRINGS SPONSOR: DEBBIE GUZZI Placed 1st.. :) to God be the glory.. :D

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James Fraser

Date: 7/26/2014 3:07:00 PM

This poem is bordering on being a 'Classic' simply a joy to read this Saturday evening in 'Bonnie Scotland' - James :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2014 5:56:00 PM

thank you

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/7/2014 7:26:00 PM

Fantastic Win Olive! Congratulations my dear.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 2:05:00 PM

Thank you Richard..:) GBU

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/5/2014 5:04:00 AM

Olive! Congrats on your win in Debbie's contest with this Sijo filled with wonderful imagery! Debbie is a great contest sponsor. You should be very proud of your win! :) Hugs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/5/2014 12:08:00 PM

Aha yes I'm honored that she placed me on top..:) but still to God be the greatest glory thanks for dropping by

Len Gasun

Date: 7/4/2014 1:03:00 PM

This is extremely awesome my dear friend Olive! Thank you so much for your sharing! Many congratulations on your top win! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/5/2014 12:06:00 PM

Thanks Leonora for awesome comments..:) to God be the glory:)

Elaine George

Date: 7/4/2014 6:07:00 AM

Hi Olive, Sensational Sijo string. Many congrats on your number one hit. bfn Lainie

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/5/2014 12:05:00 PM

Thank you Elaine..:) glad for your drop by .. :)

Ct Duet

Date: 7/3/2014 8:52:00 PM

Congrats Olive ,,weeee....hugs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/5/2014 5:06:00 AM

Thank you Tim or Casarah :D?.. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2014 11:36:00 AM

Nice win Olive... Linda

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/5/2014 5:07:00 AM

thank you Linda.. :)

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 7/3/2014 7:16:00 AM

A kaleidoscope of summer distilled. Congrats on 1st place

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/3/2014 11:05:00 AM

thank you.. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/3/2014 5:45:00 AM

Enjoy the top place again, very hot and sensual, Olive, congrats on the win

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/3/2014 11:40:00 AM

sensual.. :D?! not much dr. Ram.. :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2014 9:49:00 PM

Wow, what an amazing win. I bet you are so happy, sweetie pie! I had not even seen this one before. It is exactly the kind of poetry that Debs loves to see. You did great for her!! Congratulations.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/3/2014 4:58:00 AM

thanks much :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/3/2014 4:58:00 AM

:D Yes am so happy Ansre :) as I did not expect it.. :) weeee. :D

Joseph May

Date: 7/2/2014 7:15:00 PM

Congrats on a great win Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 8:50:00 PM

Thank you Joseph.. :D

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/2/2014 4:56:00 PM

Back again to applause your win!! yahoo! way to go girl :) :) Happy Hugs!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 8:49:00 PM

hahah I like your cheers CAsarah.. :) hey I saw your fb .. you are pretty with your lovely kids.. :D

David Williams

Date: 7/2/2014 4:23:00 PM

olive congrats on an excellent win...David

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 8:48:00 PM

Thank you David.. I love yours too. :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/2/2014 3:31:00 PM

Hi Olive, congratulations on another well-deserved TOP win! This is hot, hot, hot! Kindest regards.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 8:47:00 PM

thanks for your hot comments Pandita.. :D God bless you.. :)

John Lawless

Date: 7/2/2014 2:08:00 PM

I'll be right back I have to go take a cold shower. WOW!! An extremely torrid affair, this Sijo, Well done. Congrats on finishing on top.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 8:46:00 PM

hahah you have humor.. :D thanks so much kudos as well John.. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/2/2014 1:51:00 PM

Wow a tremendous write Olive ! Loved every string ,, deserved top win ,, big congrats.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 8:45:00 PM

thank Dr. Upma.. :) COngrats too.. :D

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/2/2014 1:23:00 PM

Congrats on a sizzling top win, Olive my friend! Hugs.. Arlene

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 8:44:00 PM

thank you so much Arlene.. :) for your sizzling comment.. :D i miss eating sizzling something. :D let's share one.. :D

Paul Callus

Date: 7/2/2014 12:25:00 PM

Congratulations Olive_eloi!!!!! You rock with hot summer love:)) Another top spot winner! weeeee!! Deserved beyond doubt! Dinner treat in Venice....will meet by Rialto Bridge:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 8:42:00 PM

thank yu for you trust Paul.. :) soupmail.. :D!!! God bless you.. :D please send me a guide I don't know where is that :D?

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/2/2014 12:09:00 PM

I agree completely, with Deb's choice in selecting this amazing poem as a winner! Wow, you are so talented, you took this contest by storm! It is beautifully written..congratulations!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 8:40:00 PM

Thank you Carrie.. :) such an honor that you dropped by.. :) GOd bless you ad congratulations as well :D

David Mohn

Date: 7/2/2014 11:52:00 AM

Wonderful Olive...big congrats to you!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 8:39:00 PM

Thank you David.. :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/2/2014 10:49:00 AM

Hey my girl look who's #1 whoopee!! Do the happy dance, I could see you were trying to make the syllabic groupings 'stand alones & flow together' and your line 3's take a nice leap! Whether or not all our content is exactly as a Korean would write it I myself and still unsure BUT I am sure this is a most excellent poem & I loved it. Congrad's Light & Love

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 8:37:00 PM

:D hahhaah Debbie.. :) I have not expected this one as I just enjoyed writing and writing and learning and learning... :D thank you so much God bless you :) and thanks for sponsoring this contest.. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/10/2014 9:21:00 AM

Oh yes! this is hot! Passion flows in sultry mood! I like the picture of the "rising heat cocoons blushing nymph". Well done! // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/11/2014 4:54:00 PM

Thank you Paul.. :) i like yours too.. :D