Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Sijo

Hot Summer Love

Clear eyes stargaze on sun-kissed days ~ Barley autumn, bosoms ablaze.
Warm breeze brush bathing heavens, rainbow hues fusing chase and tease
Whispers ~ touch spirit lips, rising heat cocoons blushing nymph.

Kites sky flight tickling blue clouds, surfing glides breathtaking stunts.
Nonstop beats, hormones flush, spiraling awesome thrilling release!
Old boy, ebbing energy, please bounce back accompany me... 

Birds playing sweet symphonic tune, cunning beau shows sultry actions.
Running torrid wild lustful tokens caress peaks fast and vast
Tonic willpower, how will I have golden sunbeams hopes?

Heart, listen, you fire in rush ~ don't you hurry, stay low and calm.
As torments waves each passing year, eases control for you and me.
Oh, if I took your lead, heart, I would hate many men now.


(c) Olive Eloisa
12:31 am
June 09, 2014

CONTEST: SIJO STRINGS
SPONSOR: DEBBIE GUZZI
Placed 1st.. :) to God be the glory.. :D

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James Fraser July 26, 2014 at 3:07 PM This poem is bordering on being a 'Classic' simply a joy to read this Saturday evening in 'Bonnie Scotland' - James :)

Poet Destroyer A July 23, 2014 at 5:56 PM thank you

Richard Lamoureux July 7, 2014 at 7:26 PM Fantastic Win Olive! Congratulations my dear. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 12, 2014 at 2:05 PM Thank you Richard..:) GBU

Eileen Manassian July 5, 2014 at 5:04 AM Olive! Congrats on your win in Debbie's contest with this Sijo filled with wonderful imagery! Debbie is a great contest sponsor. You should be very proud of your win! :) Hugs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 5, 2014 at 12:08 PM Aha yes I'm honored that she placed me on top..:) but still to God be the greatest glory thanks for dropping by

Len Gasun July 4, 2014 at 1:03 PM This is extremely awesome my dear friend Olive! Thank you so much for your sharing! Many congratulations on your top win! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 5, 2014 at 12:06 PM Thanks Leonora for awesome comments..:) to God be the glory:)

Elaine George July 4, 2014 at 6:07 AM Hi Olive, Sensational Sijo string. Many congrats on your number one hit. bfn Lainie Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 5, 2014 at 12:05 PM Thank you Elaine..:) glad for your drop by .. :)

Ct Duet July 3, 2014 at 8:52 PM Congrats Olive ,,weeee....hugs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 5, 2014 at 5:06 AM Thank you Tim or Casarah :D?.. :)

Poet Destroyer A July 3, 2014 at 11:36 AM Nice win Olive... Linda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 5, 2014 at 5:07 AM thank you Linda.. :)

D.W. Rodgers July 3, 2014 at 7:16 AM A kaleidoscope of summer distilled. Congrats on 1st place Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 3, 2014 at 11:05 AM thank you.. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta July 3, 2014 at 5:45 AM Enjoy the top place again, very hot and sensual, Olive, congrats on the win Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 3, 2014 at 11:40 AM sensual.. :D?! not much dr. Ram.. :D

Andrea Dietrich July 2, 2014 at 9:49 PM Wow, what an amazing win. I bet you are so happy, sweetie pie! I had not even seen this one before. It is exactly the kind of poetry that Debs loves to see. You did great for her!! Congratulations. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 3, 2014 at 4:58 AM thanks much :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 3, 2014 at 4:58 AM :D Yes am so happy Ansre :) as I did not expect it.. :) weeee. :D

Joseph May July 2, 2014 at 7:15 PM Congrats on a great win Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 2, 2014 at 8:50 PM Thank you Joseph.. :D

Casarah Nance July 2, 2014 at 4:56 PM Back again to applause your win!! yahoo! way to go girl :) :) Happy Hugs! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 2, 2014 at 8:49 PM hahah I like your cheers CAsarah.. :) hey I saw your fb .. you are pretty with your lovely kids.. :D

David Williams July 2, 2014 at 4:23 PM olive congrats on an excellent win...David Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 2, 2014 at 8:48 PM Thank you David.. I love yours too. :)

Pandita Sietesantos July 2, 2014 at 3:31 PM Hi Olive, congratulations on another well-deserved TOP win! This is hot, hot, hot! Kindest regards. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 2, 2014 at 8:47 PM thanks for your hot comments Pandita.. :D God bless you.. :)

John Lawless July 2, 2014 at 2:08 PM I'll be right back I have to go take a cold shower. WOW!! An extremely torrid affair, this Sijo, Well done. Congrats on finishing on top. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 2, 2014 at 8:46 PM hahah you have humor.. :D thanks so much kudos as well John.. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 2, 2014 at 1:51 PM Wow a tremendous write Olive ! Loved every string ,, deserved top win ,, big congrats. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 2, 2014 at 8:45 PM thank Dr. Upma.. :) COngrats too.. :D

Arlene Smith July 2, 2014 at 1:23 PM Congrats on a sizzling top win, Olive my friend! Hugs.. Arlene Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 2, 2014 at 8:44 PM thank you so much Arlene.. :) for your sizzling comment.. :D i miss eating sizzling something. :D let's share one.. :D

Paul Callus July 2, 2014 at 12:25 PM Congratulations Olive_eloi!!!!! You rock with hot summer love:)) Another top spot winner! weeeee!! Deserved beyond doubt! Dinner treat in Venice....will meet by Rialto Bridge:) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 2, 2014 at 8:42 PM thank yu for you trust Paul.. :) soupmail.. :D!!! God bless you.. :D please send me a guide I don't know where is that :D?

Carrie Richards July 2, 2014 at 12:09 PM I agree completely, with Deb's choice in selecting this amazing poem as a winner! Wow, you are so talented, you took this contest by storm! It is beautifully written..congratulations! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 2, 2014 at 8:40 PM Thank you Carrie.. :) such an honor that you dropped by.. :) GOd bless you ad congratulations as well :D

David Mohn July 2, 2014 at 11:52 AM Wonderful Olive...big congrats to you!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 2, 2014 at 8:39 PM Thank you David.. :)

Debbie Guzzi July 2, 2014 at 10:49 AM Hey my girl look who's #1 whoopee!! Do the happy dance, I could see you were trying to make the syllabic groupings 'stand alones & flow together' and your line 3's take a nice leap! Whether or not all our content is exactly as a Korean would write it I myself and still unsure BUT I am sure this is a most excellent poem & I loved it. Congrad's Light & Love Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 2, 2014 at 8:37 PM :D hahhaah Debbie.. :) I have not expected this one as I just enjoyed writing and writing and learning and learning... :D thank you so much God bless you :) and thanks for sponsoring this contest.. :)

Paul Callus June 10, 2014 at 9:21 AM Oh yes! this is hot! Passion flows in sultry mood! I like the picture of the "rising heat cocoons blushing nymph". Well done! // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 11, 2014 at 4:54 PM Thank you Paul.. :) i like yours too.. :D

Jan Allison June 9, 2014 at 5:03 PM SIMPLY STUNNING SIJO - no other words can describe it! Hugs Jan xxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 11, 2014 at 4:27 PM Thank you Jan.. :) I appreciate your every drop.. :)

Casarah Nance June 9, 2014 at 1:46 PM Hot! what a great Sijo! You did marvelous :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 9, 2014 at 3:38 PM Thank you Casarah.. :) GBU HUGS,, :)

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