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Oh, my sweet Grandma was a real great storyteller, she could weave a story a thousand different ways, she repeated herself a lot but we would never tell her, one story, I liked was when she was a kid; and it rained for days and the street was like a lake. After the rain stopped it got hot, hot, well it was July, and a lot of the kids on the street took advantage; of the street lake and got their bathing suits for a swim, she said, it was so amazing and people watched; all afternoon they splashed around in the cool water. She said, her Ma saw her and started to loudly yell, from the apartment window to get out of the water; but my Grandma just pretended not to hear her, I think, I inherited that skill, anyways finally; her Ma came down to yank her out but could not get hold. Anyways, it was a obviously a happy memory for Grandma, she would tell the story laughing on hot summer days; when we were complaining about the heat, and we would, wish that it would rain and make our street a lake; like Grandma's story . . . (Mother said she made it up!!) _________________________ August 25, 2017 Poetry/Verse/"Hot Summer Day" Copyright Protected, ID 17-933-769-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, No. 105, Standard sponsor, Brian Strand First Place _____________________________ Written for the contest, Hot Summer Day sponsor, Eve Roper Second Place

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Date: 7/31/2018 3:10:00 PM
Lovely storytelling. Very endearing, Dear Heart. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 7/29/2018 12:35:00 AM
enjoyed this story. congratulations on win.
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Date: 7/28/2018 7:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Well done!
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Date: 7/28/2018 6:11:00 PM
I love this poem, Constance, great imagery and rhyme. Congratulations on your win.. . Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/18/2017 8:31:00 PM
Congratulations on you placement with this gem. Well said, Broken Wings.
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Date: 9/18/2017 6:26:00 PM
congrats, broken wings!
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Date: 9/18/2017 3:05:00 PM
Lovely poem Broken Wings, congrats :)
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Date: 9/18/2017 10:54:00 AM
Can't make up the joy in her eyes, congratulations...
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Date: 9/18/2017 12:53:00 AM
Congratulation, BW on your win with a lovely flowing poem. So nostalgic.
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Date: 9/17/2017 5:43:00 PM
Thank you, Broken Wings, for entering my contest. You reminded me of my grandma and her story telling, I love every word she said.... Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 8/26/2017 3:03:00 PM
lovely poem indeed, my friend. Thanks for the place in your contest. Hope all's well with you & those two kitties x
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