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''Hot Summer Day''

Oh, my sweet Grandma was a real great storyteller,
      she could weave a story a thousand different ways,
she repeated herself a lot but we would never tell her,
            one story, I liked was when she was a kid;
and it rained for days and the street was like a lake.

After the rain stopped it got hot, hot, well it was July,
      and a lot of the kids on the street took advantage;
of the street lake and got their bathing suits for a swim,
            she said, it was so amazing and people watched;
all afternoon they splashed around in the cool water.

She said, her Ma saw her and started to loudly yell,
      from the apartment window to get out of the water;
but my Grandma just pretended not to hear her,
            I think, I inherited that skill, anyways finally;
her Ma came down to yank her out but could not get hold.

Anyways, it was a obviously a happy memory for Grandma,
      she would tell the story laughing on hot summer days;
when we were complaining about the heat, and we would,
            wish that it would rain and make our street a lake;
like Grandma's story . . . (Mother said she made it up!!)

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August 25, 2017


Poetry/Verse/"Hot Summer Day"
Copyright Protected, ID 17-933-769-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Submitted to the contest, No. 105, Standard
sponsor, Brian Strand

First Place
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Written for the contest, Hot Summer Day
sponsor, Eve Roper

Second Place
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Gauthier Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 3:10 PM
Lovely storytelling. Very endearing, Dear Heart. Congrats on your top win.
Waters Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 12:35 AM
enjoyed this story. congratulations on win.
Gentry Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 7:11 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Well done!
Roper Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 6:11 PM
I love this poem, Constance, great imagery and rhyme. Congratulations on your win.. . Hugs Eve
Webster Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 6:26 PM
congrats, broken wings!
Smith Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 3:05 PM
Lovely poem Broken Wings, congrats :)
Smith Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 10:54 AM
Can't make up the joy in her eyes, congratulations...
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 12:53 AM
Congratulation, BW on your win with a lovely flowing poem. So nostalgic.
Roper Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 5:43 PM
Thank you, Broken Wings, for entering my contest. You reminded me of my grandma and her story telling, I love every word she said.... Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve ~`*
Horne Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 3:03 PM
lovely poem indeed, my friend. Thanks for the place in your contest. Hope all's well with you & those two kitties x
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