Yanny Widjanarko Poet Haiku

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Monsoon yet come soon
Sweat, sweat, sweat, melt till get wet
Stifling in rhyming



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                                                      3rd place
           HAIKU 101 FOR NEWBIES TO HAIKU AND/OR POETRY SOUP CONTESTS
                                       Contest Judged:  11/23/2012
                                    Sponsored by: Charles Henderson
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Carol Sunshine Brown December 3, 2012 at 6:15 AM Congratulations on your super win in Charles' "Haiku" contest Yanny. I am sorry this is a very late comment. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich November 25, 2012 at 8:42 AM I love how you related the monsoon to writing. Awesome last line! congrats on your win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl November 24, 2012 at 5:50 AM Big congratulations on your win Yanny, hugs xx

Poet Destroyer A November 23, 2012 at 6:16 PM Yanny, congratulations with your haiku win,,, take care..pd

Anne-Lise Andresen November 10, 2012 at 11:37 AM Well written Haiku, Yanny ! Wishing you a lovely weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)