Hot Spot
Monsoon yet come soon
Sweat, sweat, sweat, melt till get wet
Stifling in rhyming
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3rd place
HAIKU 101 FOR NEWBIES TO HAIKU AND/OR POETRY SOUP CONTESTS
Contest Judged: 11/23/2012
Sponsored by: Charles Henderson
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Copyright © Yanny Widjanarko | Year Posted 2012
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