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The mall parking lot What amazing view__mankind All ages, races Automatic door entered With many varied motives

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Date: 8/8/2010 1:34:00 PM
good write Sara! JB
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Date: 8/7/2010 6:25:00 PM
glimpse of time in the universe.
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Date: 8/7/2010 3:25:00 PM
Fabulous write Sara.. u just wrote it perfectly.. am on the beach today in the brilliant sunshine.. mall is for winter to me.. good luck in Rick's contest.. my entry is FREE with luv and happy weekend...
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