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Hot Chocolate, Coffee and Tea

I sure even love a cup my Cuz' of a hot on hot choc the sweet olate week tea. I in the ends crave cold I do the winter like sugar days. a nice in my I need cup belly the sweet of with taste but coff some only on ee toast week or and days. jelly DRINKING HOT CHOCOLATE, COFFEE AND HOT TEA, BRINGS REFRESHING MOMENTS OF SINCERE CLARITY. I INVITE MY MOTHER OVER EVERY TUESDAY MORNING, SOMETIMES SHE SHOWS UP WITHOUT ANY WARNING. SUNDAYS BEFORE CHURCH HOT CHOCOLATE I EMBRACE AND ALWAYS GET MARSHMALLOWS ON MY LIPS AND ON / / / / MY FACE. FORGIVE ME IF I SOUND STRANGE WHEN / / / I SAY I CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT THESE BEVERAGES, I / / / ABSOLUTELY CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT REFRESHMENTS / / / MY THROAT MAY START TO HAEMORRHAGE! I EVEN / / DRINK COFFEE AT NIGHT BEFORE BED AND YET MY / / BODY COMFORTABLE AND AT EASE IS MY HEAD. IF / / I DIED TODAY I HAVE BUT ONLY ONE WISH, TO BE / / BURIED WITH MY FAVORITE CUP AND CHINA DISH. / / IF THERE'S ONE THING I WANT TO BE REMEMBERED / / FOR IS THAT AFTER I DRINK COFFEE I ALWAYS WANT MORE! WHEN THE DAY BEGINS AND NIGHT STARTS TO FADE I'LL BE GRATEFUL FOR THE AWESOME SWEET TEA I MADE. PLEASE ONE MORE SUGAR IN MY HOT COFFEE! March 8, 2017

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Date: 9/21/2017 7:52:00 PM
This is a beauty! Lovely poem AND artistically delivered!! What a treat - definitely a new favourite for me.
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Date: 5/11/2017 11:25:00 PM
Laura Loo, great job again!!
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Date: 4/7/2017 2:13:00 PM
How totally clever, Laura Loo! I'm the same way. Gotta have those tasty beverages. I especially liked the way you portrayed the steam coming off the cup. And, congrats on getting on the "Best New Poems" list.
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Date: 3/11/2017 2:13:00 AM
Lovely poem.... congrats on being selected...
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Date: 3/10/2017 4:46:00 PM
I can only imagine the skill, thought and care that goes into crafting such an incredible piece. Your words in shape convey such enjoyment with each beverage while the remainder is chock full of witty and very sharp entertaining dialogue.:-) A remarkable piece, exceptionally well composed...A pleasure to read. Congratulations on POTD! Most worthy an honour...true art :-) blessings, lynn
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2017 4:52:00 PM
thank you lovely Lynn :)-luloo
Date: 3/10/2017 11:09:00 AM
Wonderful!!! how do you do that? Congratulations Laura on POTD honors...
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2017 11:16:00 AM
A lot of time and patience! Started over 5 times lol thank you :)-luloo
Date: 3/10/2017 10:19:00 AM
Cool and funny poem, Laura. A wonderful POTD. Congrats to you. You are a true poetic artist. Great visuals. Double 7! Love always.
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2017 11:14:00 AM
Thank you Freddie :)-luloo
Date: 3/10/2017 9:16:00 AM
Wow! Congratulations on potd; I'm so glad it was made potd else I may have missed this fabulous piece of art. Love it! xomo
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2017 9:47:00 AM
thank you sweet Maureen! :) -luloo
Date: 3/10/2017 8:01:00 AM
Laura WOW !!! what a fantastic and wonderful poem you have penned, so creative and CONGRATULATIONS on Poem Of The Day ~
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2017 8:21:00 AM
thank you sweet Broken Wings! :)-luloo
Date: 3/10/2017 7:52:00 AM
I always relish my cup of coffee or tea.This poem and the form you chose are outstanding,Laura!Congrats!
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2017 8:20:00 AM
thank you lovely Sara :) -luloo
Date: 3/10/2017 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations certainly. Oh the time this must have taken you to execute such an entry. This entry has a marvelous theme and its words make it come alive. Well done entirely. Congratulations once again.
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2017 8:19:00 AM
thank you! Yes it took me an hour! :)-luloo
Date: 3/10/2017 7:40:00 AM
- I really enjoy this cup of hot chocolate, tea or coffee Laura - Well done - Congrats on your p.o.t.d. !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2017 8:19:00 AM
thank you sweet lady :)-luloo
Date: 3/10/2017 6:54:00 AM
Congrats on poem of the day, luloo. Love your shape poem!
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2017 8:17:00 AM
thank you Agnes! :)-luloo
Date: 3/10/2017 6:35:00 AM
What an original way to write. I love this. Congrats. Well deserved.
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Date: 3/10/2017 6:54:00 AM
thank you Janet :)-luloo
Date: 3/10/2017 4:59:00 AM
Oh wow luloo, this is absolutely wonderful!!! It is so much harder to do than it seems :D Grats on PotD
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2017 6:54:00 AM
thank you Darren! :)-luloo
Date: 3/10/2017 1:32:00 AM
Nice acrostic.... congrats on being chosen...
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2017 6:53:00 AM
thank you :)-luloo
Date: 3/9/2017 8:15:00 AM
This is beautiful, Laura, I love your coffee and hot chocolate here :) a 7:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2017 6:53:00 AM
thank you sweet Jo! :)-luloo
Date: 3/8/2017 4:06:00 PM
A wonderful concrete poem, Laura! Very creative and fun! Blessings, Kim
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2017 6:53:00 AM
thank you Kim!! :)-luloo
Date: 3/8/2017 3:53:00 PM
Well, if this isn't the most creative, magnificent shape poem, I just don't know what else is better out there!! Great job, Laura Loo!! 7+
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2017 6:52:00 AM
thank you Laura! :) -luloo
Date: 3/8/2017 2:54:00 PM
Wow! A lot of work went into this piece. It looks amazing!! Like you I love my coffee.
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/10/2017 6:52:00 AM
thank you! -luloo

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