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On a cold, snowy night, Ted’s wife said, “Let’s go share something hot in our bed.” Lying ready, he waited for his lust to be sated. They had rich, sweet hot cocoa instead.
9 9 7 7 9 syllable count December 31, 2020 entered in the Winter Snow or Ice Contest placed 2nd Sponsor: Tania Kitchen

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Date: 1/10/2021 12:01:00 PM
Some like it HOT (cocoa hits the SPOT) Congrats on your win!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/26/2021 7:27:00 PM
A belated THANK YOU, Andrea! Janice
Date: 1/9/2021 6:02:00 PM
So wonderfully written! Perfect!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/26/2021 7:28:00 PM
A belated THANK YOU, Caren! Janice
Date: 1/8/2021 2:59:00 PM
Dropping back with many congrats Janice:-) hugs jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/26/2021 7:28:00 PM
A belated THANK YOU, Jan! Janice
Date: 1/8/2021 1:49:00 PM
Your work is a winner way to go..Congrats. Sara
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/26/2021 7:29:00 PM
A belated THANK YOU, Sara. Janice
Date: 1/8/2021 11:26:00 AM
Brilliant hot cocoa sounds lovely :-) Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/26/2021 7:30:00 PM
A belated THANK YOU, Joanna. Janice
Date: 1/8/2021 7:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Janice! Still hot!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/26/2021 7:30:00 PM
A belated THANK YOU, Mark. Janice
Date: 1/8/2021 5:40:00 AM
Too cute Janice. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/26/2021 7:31:00 PM
A belated THANK YOU, Linda. Janice
Date: 1/8/2021 3:59:00 AM
Janice, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute limerick!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/26/2021 7:32:00 PM
A belated THANK YOU, Tania. Janice
Date: 1/6/2021 7:22:00 PM
Sounds ideal to me... I don't know... What's wrong? The cocoa's hot!... lol. ~ Older, if not wiser
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/26/2021 7:33:00 PM
A belated THANK YOU, Gershon. Janice
Date: 1/6/2021 3:42:00 PM
Hello Janice Canerdy, I was laughing at the end of the poem. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/26/2021 7:33:00 PM
A belated THANK YOU, Darlene. Janice
Date: 1/5/2021 10:07:00 AM
LOL, sometimes that’s the hot toddy you need ;)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/26/2021 7:34:00 PM
A belated THANK YOU, Kim. Janice
Date: 1/4/2021 2:07:00 PM
Lolol poor Ted! Good one Janice!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/4/2021 3:26:00 PM
Thanks so much, FJ. Janice
Date: 1/2/2021 10:24:00 PM
G’day Janice … and why not. That sounds good to me - Happy New Year Janice - Lindsay
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/3/2021 2:11:00 PM
Thanks so much, Lindsay. Happy New Year! Janice
Date: 1/2/2021 8:26:00 AM
Well, it is good that he had something some warm and flavorful. Enjoyed reading your work. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Sara
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/2/2021 1:26:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sara. Janice
Date: 1/1/2021 10:53:00 AM
How could you possibly make that up? Aloha! Rico
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/1/2021 11:23:00 AM
It's just the way my fevered brain works, Rico! LOL! Janice
Date: 1/1/2021 6:26:00 AM
Poor Ted. Hot cocoa on a winter night not a bad substitute. Fun read, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/1/2021 6:38:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
Date: 1/1/2021 2:59:00 AM
Lol, love it Janice, happy new year to you and your family. Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/1/2021 6:39:00 AM
Thanks so much, Tom. Happy New Year! Janice
Date: 12/31/2020 5:07:00 PM
ha ha ha love it! Happy new year janice:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/31/2020 5:09:00 PM
Thanks a million, Jan! Happy New Year to you too. Janice

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