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Hot and Sweet

On a cold, snowy night, Ted’s wife said,
“Let’s go share something hot in our bed.”
Lying ready, he waited
for his lust to be sated.
They had rich, sweet hot cocoa instead.


9  9  7  7  9    syllable count

December 31, 2020
entered in the Winter Snow or Ice Contest    placed 2nd
Sponsor: Tania Kitchen

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Andrea Dietrich January 10, 2021 at 12:01 PM Some like it HOT (cocoa hits the SPOT) Congrats on your win! Janice Canerdy January 26, 2021 at 7:27 PM A belated THANK YOU, Andrea! Janice

Caren Krutsinger January 9, 2021 at 6:02 PM So wonderfully written! Perfect! Janice Canerdy January 26, 2021 at 7:28 PM A belated THANK YOU, Caren! Janice

Jan Allison January 8, 2021 at 2:59 PM Dropping back with many congrats Janice:-) hugs jan xx Janice Canerdy January 26, 2021 at 7:28 PM A belated THANK YOU, Jan! Janice

Sara Kendrick January 8, 2021 at 1:49 PM Your work is a winner way to go..Congrats. Sara Janice Canerdy January 26, 2021 at 7:29 PM A belated THANK YOU, Sara. Janice

Jo Chamberlain January 8, 2021 at 11:26 AM Brilliant hot cocoa sounds lovely :-) Congratulations on your winning placement. Janice Canerdy January 26, 2021 at 7:30 PM A belated THANK YOU, Joanna. Janice

Mark Koplin January 8, 2021 at 7:16 AM Congratulations on your win, Janice! Still hot! Janice Canerdy January 26, 2021 at 7:30 PM A belated THANK YOU, Mark. Janice

Linda Alice Fowler January 8, 2021 at 5:40 AM Too cute Janice. Congratulations on the win! Linda Janice Canerdy January 26, 2021 at 7:31 PM A belated THANK YOU, Linda. Janice

Tania Kitchin January 8, 2021 at 3:59 AM Janice, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute limerick! Janice Canerdy January 26, 2021 at 7:32 PM A belated THANK YOU, Tania. Janice

Gershon Wolf January 6, 2021 at 7:22 PM Sounds ideal to me... I don't know... What's wrong? The cocoa's hot!... lol. ~ Older, if not wiser Janice Canerdy January 26, 2021 at 7:33 PM A belated THANK YOU, Gershon. Janice

Darlene De Beaulieu January 6, 2021 at 3:42 PM Hello Janice Canerdy, I was laughing at the end of the poem. Enjoy your evening my friend. Janice Canerdy January 26, 2021 at 7:33 PM A belated THANK YOU, Darlene. Janice

Kim Rodrigues January 5, 2021 at 10:07 AM LOL, sometimes that’s the hot toddy you need ;) Janice Canerdy January 26, 2021 at 7:34 PM A belated THANK YOU, Kim. Janice

FJ Thomas January 4, 2021 at 2:07 PM Lolol poor Ted! Good one Janice! Janice Canerdy January 4, 2021 at 3:26 PM Thanks so much, FJ. Janice

Lindsay Laurie January 2, 2021 at 10:24 PM G’day Janice … and why not. That sounds good to me - Happy New Year Janice - Lindsay Janice Canerdy January 3, 2021 at 2:11 PM Thanks so much, Lindsay. Happy New Year! Janice

Sara Kendrick January 2, 2021 at 8:26 AM Well, it is good that he had something some warm and flavorful. Enjoyed reading your work. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Sara Janice Canerdy January 2, 2021 at 1:26 PM Thanks so much, Sara. Janice

Rico Leffanta January 1, 2021 at 10:53 AM How could you possibly make that up? Aloha! Rico Janice Canerdy January 1, 2021 at 11:23 AM It's just the way my fevered brain works, Rico! LOL! Janice

Vijay Pandit January 1, 2021 at 6:26 AM Poor Ted. Hot cocoa on a winter night not a bad substitute. Fun read, Janice. Janice Canerdy January 1, 2021 at 6:38 AM Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice

Tom Cunningham January 1, 2021 at 2:59 AM Lol, love it Janice, happy new year to you and your family. Tom Janice Canerdy January 1, 2021 at 6:39 AM Thanks so much, Tom. Happy New Year! Janice

Jan Allison December 31, 2020 at 5:07 PM ha ha ha love it! Happy new year janice:-) hugs Jan xx Janice Canerdy December 31, 2020 at 5:09 PM Thanks a million, Jan! Happy New Year to you too. Janice