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Hospital Hump - a Tall Tale-Or Not

“HOSPITAL HUMP” (a tall tale – or not?) The wind and the cold on the hill they stood still as two shadows arrived near the peak above what was known as “Hospital Hump” a devious, dastardly, butt crushing bump. So started the legend a Grand-dad and Grand-son who challenged the hill “OH, just for fun!!” The younger had shouted “Papa, do the hump” to which he replied “it’s just one more bump.” They stood at the top no fear…..maybe traces looked down on the horrified frost frozen faces. Thus the legend was born of a daring descent toward the “Hospital Hump” and all that name meant. Bright blue of their chariot rippling with speed gathering momentum approaching the deed. Then, as all of nature and man stood aghast they hit “Hospital Hump” going way, way too fast. Frozen in time against pure blue-black light Papa and Grandson about to take flight. The toboggan drew air as the partnership crumbled the younger continued the older – he tumbled back flipped and rolled in the feather cold snow. The toboggan continued its arc o’er the trees as the terrified crowd fell to their knees, the kid – now alone looking down on the trees. Grandpa was up! Tracing the arc wondering if it would touch down by dark. The crowd gathered near unsure of their place straining they saw two eyes and a face, under the snow an ice covered grin shouted “C’MON PAPA LET’S DO IT AGAIN!” 6/30/2016 submitted to – Tell a Tall Tale – Poetry Contest sponsor – Jesse Day

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Date: 7/7/2016 10:56:00 PM
Loved it loved it loved it......Seren
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John Lawless
Date: 7/8/2016 7:38:00 AM
glad you liked it Seren.
Date: 7/6/2016 2:55:00 PM
Congrats on your great Tall Tale story x
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John Lawless
Date: 7/8/2016 7:38:00 AM
Thanks Wendy
Date: 7/6/2016 9:35:00 AM
LOL! Loved this! Congrats on the win!
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John Lawless
Date: 7/6/2016 10:19:00 AM
Thanks Carol it was one of those stellar grandpa moments....
Date: 7/6/2016 8:56:00 AM
Hi John, Great story telling! Congrats on your well deserved win:-) Alexis
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John Lawless
Date: 7/6/2016 10:17:00 AM
Thanks Alexis, it only took 2-3 years of therapy before I could get on a toboggan again.....
Date: 7/6/2016 7:57:00 AM
Well told, congrats.
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John Lawless
Date: 7/6/2016 10:16:00 AM
Thanks Richard. It seems that whenever the kids/grandkids were in search of "someone" to assist them in their mischief their default setting was ...."Hey, let's ask Papa!"
Date: 7/6/2016 2:48:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the "Tell a Tall Tale" contest - Loved the energy and the last line is perfect! - Jesse
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John Lawless
Date: 7/6/2016 10:14:00 AM
Jesse, my grandson is 26 now and still loves to tell the story. Thanks for taking the time to administer such a great contest.
Date: 7/4/2016 8:53:00 PM
Cute poem about an adventurous Grandpa and Grandson! (Who reminds me of the next Evil Kneviel, lol!) :)
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John Lawless
Date: 7/6/2016 10:13:00 AM
Well Cheryl, it was an exciting ride followed by a trip to the chiropractor. Thanks for stopping by to read and comment.

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