Hospital Hump - a Tall Tale-Or Not

“HOSPITAL HUMP” 
(a tall tale – or not?)

The wind and the cold on the hill
they stood still
as two shadows arrived
near the peak
above what was known
as “Hospital Hump”
a devious, dastardly,
butt crushing bump.
So started the legend
a Grand-dad and Grand-son
who challenged the hill
“OH, just for fun!!”
The younger had shouted
“Papa, do the hump”
to which he replied
“it’s just one more bump.”
They stood at the top
no fear…..maybe traces
looked down on the horrified
frost frozen faces.
Thus the legend was born
of a daring descent
toward the “Hospital Hump”
and all that name meant.
Bright blue of their chariot
rippling with speed
gathering momentum
approaching the deed.
Then, as all of nature
and man stood aghast
they hit “Hospital Hump”
going way, way too fast.
Frozen in time
against pure blue-black light
Papa and Grandson
about to take flight.
The toboggan drew air
as the partnership crumbled
the younger  continued
the older – he tumbled
back flipped and rolled
in the feather cold snow.

The toboggan continued
its arc o’er the trees
as the terrified crowd
fell to their knees,
the kid – now alone
looking down on the trees.
Grandpa was up!
Tracing the arc
wondering if 
it would touch down
by dark.
The crowd gathered near
unsure of their place
straining they saw
two eyes and a face,
under the snow
an ice covered grin
shouted “C’MON PAPA
LET’S DO IT AGAIN!”



6/30/2016

submitted to – Tell a Tall Tale – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Jesse Day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/7/2016 10:56:00 PM
Loved it loved it loved it......Seren
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John Lawless
Date: 7/8/2016 7:38:00 AM
glad you liked it Seren.
Date: 7/6/2016 2:55:00 PM
Congrats on your great Tall Tale story x
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John Lawless
Date: 7/8/2016 7:38:00 AM
Thanks Wendy
Date: 7/6/2016 9:35:00 AM
LOL! Loved this! Congrats on the win!
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John Lawless
Date: 7/6/2016 10:19:00 AM
Thanks Carol it was one of those stellar grandpa moments....
Date: 7/6/2016 8:56:00 AM
Hi John, Great story telling! Congrats on your well deserved win:-) Alexis
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John Lawless
Date: 7/6/2016 10:17:00 AM
Thanks Alexis, it only took 2-3 years of therapy before I could get on a toboggan again.....
Date: 7/6/2016 7:57:00 AM
Well told, congrats.
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John Lawless
Date: 7/6/2016 10:16:00 AM
Thanks Richard. It seems that whenever the kids/grandkids were in search of "someone" to assist them in their mischief their default setting was ...."Hey, let's ask Papa!"
Date: 7/6/2016 2:48:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the "Tell a Tall Tale" contest - Loved the energy and the last line is perfect! - Jesse
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John Lawless
Date: 7/6/2016 10:14:00 AM
Jesse, my grandson is 26 now and still loves to tell the story. Thanks for taking the time to administer such a great contest.
Date: 7/4/2016 8:53:00 PM
Cute poem about an adventurous Grandpa and Grandson! (Who reminds me of the next Evil Kneviel, lol!) :)
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John Lawless
Date: 7/6/2016 10:13:00 AM
Well Cheryl, it was an exciting ride followed by a trip to the chiropractor. Thanks for stopping by to read and comment.
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