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Very sick with leukemia toward the end. It almost seemed as if mother was giving up after what she considered a hard and disappointing life.  She still held her boys in her eyes in the fading light. “I'm not planning your funeral,” the doctor said. winter sun stretched to twilight faint stars

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Date: 4/6/2016 10:50:00 AM
Thomas, a very emotional write, it touched my heart 7 ~
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Date: 4/6/2016 4:10:00 AM
touched bu this formidable piece, thomas!..huggs
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Date: 4/5/2016 9:30:00 PM
Emotionally moving piece, Thomas. Well done..
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Date: 4/5/2016 3:57:00 PM
oh this is very touching - a beautiful haibun Thomas :-) hugs Jan xx7
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