Horsey-People

Sorry honey, BettyeJean can't come over and play
with you- she's got a show today
my mother said, patting me on the head
as my father muttered something
barely audible about those
mumble-grumble horsey-people
and their shows
He despised show horses
and the people who showed them

My father believed that
all things wild, animal or child
should be left alone to do their “thing”
but BettyeJean's Mama said
show horses couldn't do anything
naturally- as it might ruin their training
and I think she was afraid we might
ruin BettyeJean's training, too

All this impressed me
maybe not so much
my father's philosophy
as his choice of wording-
Horsey-People.

I pictured them all
my friend, BettyeJean
her Mama and
her Mama's high-end friends
with huge horse heads
on long arched necks
proud and haughty
resting on human upper-bodies
with horse rear-ends and legs
reared up, upright
they were quite a sight!
High-stepping
in useless circles
busy impressing themselves
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 2:02 PM
I have met some BettyeJeans, and I imagine she was jealous that you did not have to make yourself busy impressing yourself! Show Mamas, ugh! I cannot believe it when they try to tell me it is for their child. Useless circles. Uh-huh. A great write, my friend. Enjoyed a lot!
Mcferran Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 2:47 PM
Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it! You definitely inspired the style of this write, and I had so much fun with it! Yes, I can imagine growing up with that lady was NOT easy... ;(
Green Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 8:27 AM
This was really nice and I loved the ending. Made me smile.
Mcferran Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 10:16 AM
Thank you so much!!
Faulkner Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 11:01 PM
Of course, as a little girl, I wanted a horse, like most girls - really like the ending 'high stepping/in useless circles/busy impressing themselves'
Mcferran Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 11:23 PM
Thank you! I desperately wanted a horse, too... and it killed me that my best friend had horses, but I wasn't allowed to ride them because they were "show horses"! :(
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