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Horny Dilemma

HORNY DILEMMA


MANIC
	TRAFFIC
		    GRAPHIC 
			          PANIC

	days
		predestined
 			            manic
					      traffic
						        race

	finish
		line
			nights
				  graphic
					      panic
						        face


©1/19/2018

submitted to WRITE ME A TYBURN – Poetry contest
sponsor – Kim Rodrigues

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2018 11:32:00 PM

Pretty good one, JOhn. Love your formatting. The title reminds me of a guy who used to honk his horn outside the convenience store I worked at as a teen. I teased him as he came into the store by calling him HORNY. I told him if he was going to lay on his horn every time he drove up, he had to accept my nickname. He was pissed I called him that. HA I think he stopped coming in after a while!!

Pashang Salehi

Date: 1/22/2018 12:49:00 AM

Horny indeed. ..lol

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/21/2018 10:23:00 AM

John, congratulations on becoming a lifetime premium member! A great entry for the contest! : )

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 1/19/2018 9:20:00 PM

LOL...loving the first line. All sorts of graphics come to mind. My imagination is running away again.

John Fleming

Date: 1/19/2018 9:55:00 AM

What a strange format this is, John...I confess I had never heard of a "Tyburn" beforehand; good luck in the contest! My very best regards. :) john