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Horn Freedom Haiku

Bring Freedom Back To Me From here to eternity, (Reminds me of the movie.) And will plead for unity, So we can be free. Jim Horn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/7/2017 12:46:00 AM
A great poem, Jim! But I think this is senryu and not haiku! Haiku is 5/7/5 syllables! Just trying to help!
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White Wolf
Date: 2/7/2017 7:58:00 PM
Definitely keep writing!
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James Horn
Date: 2/7/2017 9:06:00 AM
So should I say sayonara to haiku or keep writing it. Jim Horn

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