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Hoping for Roses

Sue was hoping for red roses tonight It's Valentines, he better get it right Been dating him awhile Thinks he's pure class with style Until he brought fake violets in white 2/7/22 Third place Winner Contest: Roses are Red, Violets are Blue, A Valentine Challenge in one of five ways. Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/14/2023 10:38:00 PM

enjoyed reading and great example.

Belle Bellevue

Date: 5/13/2023 9:58:00 AM

A super Limerick Tania, fake white violets just don’t do the trick… Belle

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/13/2023 1:50:00 PM

Belle, thank you.

Constance La France

Date: 5/12/2023 7:47:00 AM

Tania, nothing says love and romance like red roses, fake white violets are just not going to do it... great limerick, and good example for your contest !

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/12/2023 1:02:00 PM

Constance, thank you.

Len Gasun

Date: 5/12/2023 5:59:00 AM

Good one my dear poet friend Tania. So hilarious. Hope those fake ones are more beautiful. I love it a lot and enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/12/2023 1:02:00 PM

Len, thank you.

Ann Foster

Date: 6/10/2022 2:19:00 PM

We are always waiting for perfection, yet a little less than, can be nice. He still sounds pretty cool. Well written. Ann

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/11/2022 4:47:00 AM

Thank you Ann!

Joseph May

Date: 3/28/2022 5:11:00 AM

Lol, Nicely done Tania

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/28/2022 6:29:00 PM

Thank you Joe!

jack horne

Date: 3/8/2022 7:17:00 AM

LOL, had a chuckle - thanks for the place in your contest

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/28/2022 6:29:00 PM

Thank you and you're welcome!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/27/2022 8:49:00 AM

Fake violets? -- But aren't they 'in style?!' lol. Good one, Tanya!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/27/2022 10:31:00 AM

Thank you Gershon!

Eve Roper

Date: 2/14/2022 7:41:00 PM

Tania, fake flowers are sometime are nice especially if they are silk. Congratulations on your win in Andera’s contest. Happy Valentin's Day :) Blessings my friend

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/15/2022 3:56:00 AM

Thank you Eve.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2022 6:26:00 PM

Very nicely done, Tania. BIG congrats in my contest.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/13/2022 7:09:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, it was a fun contest!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/11/2022 8:14:00 AM

Lovely limerick. He should be hanged :)

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/12/2022 4:09:00 AM

Ha ha, thank you Victor!

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/10/2022 3:13:00 PM

Tania, I love your limerick. Regrettably, she did not receive what she deserved. Bringing false flowers implies that he, too, is maybe a forger. Happy Valentine's Day, and thank you for reading and commenting on my poetry.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/12/2022 4:09:00 AM

Thank you Lasaad!