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Chasing a dream, my fledgling hopes take flight catching my complacent heart by surprise. But the instant I gazed into your eyes, a ravenous love bug began to bite. And hanging with you is such a delight it's near-impossible to verbalize. Your infectious smile makes me smile as well; unleashing my spirit, you gave it wings. And as my heart hums along, my soul sings, as if I'm under a magical spell. I've changed my ways, and the whole world can tell, I was a puppet; then you cut my strings. I have never felt so happy before, who could possibly want anything more?

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Date: 9/27/2018 11:46:00 AM
Your heart has hummed along in a delightful way in this poem, Emile. I am sure your lady love appreciates it.
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Date: 9/27/2018 12:58:00 PM
Thanks Caren, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/27/2018 9:55:00 AM
Well done, Emile. Charming.
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Date: 9/27/2018 10:15:00 AM
Thanks as always my friend, Emile.

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