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Falling in love’s magical
it feels like your heart's on fire.
And dreamers hear only hope
not the words of a liar.

When trust begins to weaken
your heart shores it up with lies.
And an outpouring of pain
replaces truth as it dies.

Fear gathers like nagging doubts
morphing into last goodbyes.
And shared dreams discreetly drown
as tears spill from crying eyes.

Let time’s current carry you
to where hope outweighs sorrow.
For like a river it flows
towards a new tomorrow.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/14/2018 2:38:00 PM

O there it is the recipe for lessons learned the hard way "And dreamers hear only hope not the words of a liar." Well done, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/14/2018 3:23:00 PM

Thanks Line, I appreciate your encouragement and support my friend, Emile.

john fedele

Date: 7/13/2016 3:31:00 PM

Loved it.

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/13/2016 5:23:00 PM

Thanks John, I appreciate your visit. Emile.

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/20/2015 7:51:00 PM

GREAT TITLE, GREAT POEM MY FRIEND AND TOP IT OFF TIS' POTD.. Excellent choice. A7

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/20/2015 8:08:00 PM

Thanks Robert, I appreciate your visit. Emile.

michael tor

Date: 11/10/2015 12:00:00 AM

A clever write my friend. Enjoyed reading. The ending ended perfectly. Congratulations for POTD. I have been extremely busy miss your writes trying to catch up.

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/10/2015 8:02:00 AM

Thanks Michael, you always manage to bring a smile to my day. Emile.

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/5/2015 1:10:00 PM

Emile, A most excellent rhyme write here indeed. Congratulations on POTD!! The power and passion of each verse is clearly apparent to the reader in this most wonderful write. Cheers and Best, Gary

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/5/2015 2:21:00 PM

Thanks Gary, I appreciate your encouraging comments of support. Emile.

scott thirtyseven

Date: 11/4/2015 6:07:00 AM

POTD well done. A much deserved place for such a wonderful, truthful read.

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/4/2015 8:45:00 AM

Thanks Scott, I appreciate the support. Emile.

red barchettadrive

Date: 11/3/2015 11:58:00 PM

You walked me up and down the road of love with this piece of work! Yay! Yay! POTD!

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/4/2015 8:46:00 AM

Thanks Red, I appreciate your comments. Emile.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/3/2015 6:58:00 PM

Emile, congratulations on poem of the day!

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/3/2015 7:14:00 PM

Thank you Eve, I appreciate it. Emile.

michael tor

Date: 11/3/2015 3:54:00 PM

Emile a wonderful inspiration cleverly written. Very touching and truthful. A well deserved POTD Emile. Congratulations my friend!!

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/3/2015 4:20:00 PM

Thank you Michael, I appreciate your encouragement and support. Emile.

Neva Romaine

Date: 11/3/2015 2:59:00 PM

Hey Emile, a warm and hearty congratulations on your wonderful poem being chosen for POTD! Uplifting and very beautiful! Be Blessed, Neva

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/3/2015 3:37:00 PM

Thank you Neva, I appreciate your encouragement and support. Emile.

Sunshine Smile

Date: 11/3/2015 2:34:00 PM

- A "light" for the day tomorrow, Emile - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/3/2015 3:38:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise, I appreciate it. Emile.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/3/2015 11:34:00 AM

Oh....what a beautiful piece. It flows straight to the heart, Emile. Bless you, dear. Congrats on POTD.

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/3/2015 1:47:00 PM

Thanks so much Eileen, I appreciate your continued support. Emile.

KP Nunez

Date: 11/3/2015 9:46:00 AM

Beautiful, real and inspiring. Congratulations on being featured as POTD, Emile! hugs!

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/3/2015 1:49:00 PM

Thanks Kim, I appreciate all of your visits. Emile.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 11/3/2015 6:52:00 AM

Hi Emile: Beautiful poem and very well conveyed in Hope.

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/3/2015 8:20:00 AM

Thank you Ralph, I appreciate your encouragement and support. Emile.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 11/3/2015 6:50:00 AM

Hi Emile: Beautiful poem.and very well in Hope.

Lin Lane

Date: 11/3/2015 5:37:00 AM

I am SO sorry I missed this one yesterday... BUT...with it being POTD, I've not missed out. You've captured the epitome of happiness by falling in love, which then falls into the abyss of pain. Hope saves us all. So well done, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/3/2015 8:21:00 AM

Thanks Lin, your friendly comments have warmed my heart. Emile.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/3/2015 4:24:00 AM

Emile, wordage a magnificent flow with glowing lines I highly comment, so like the 3rd stanza most!!!`Olive Eloisa =`)

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/3/2015 8:22:00 AM

Thanks Olive, I appreciate your encouragement and support. Emile.

Edlynn Nau

Date: 11/2/2015 12:22:00 PM

Hmmmm! It's love alright because in the end you do not ask the river to carry her away but to happiness for her while you are standing in your tears. Great rhyme, plot, scheme, and stresses. Good one Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/2/2015 6:05:00 PM

Thanks Edlynn, your words of encouragement have brought a smile to my day. Emile.

John Hamilton

Date: 11/1/2015 6:12:00 PM

so beautiful, time flows like a river to tomorrow, wonderful, thanks for sharing.

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/2/2015 7:16:00 AM

Thanks John, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/1/2015 5:07:00 PM

Oh Emile, this is wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! The honest content in your carefully chosen rhyming words. Comparing Time to being a river is brilliant! You have chosen words that anyone can relate to, even those who do not favor poetry. You have expressed so well the human heart, in and out of love, and the deep feelings that make love so magical. I dearly love this poem and am fav'ing it. #7

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/2/2015 7:17:00 AM

Connie, you always make me feel good about myself, and for that I can't thank you enough. Emile.