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Hope In Colors Fair

At last, the golden hint of sun Is piercing through the gloom As shadowed forces holding still Have finally found their doom The rays of hope in colors fair Have spoken to the sky With expectation now to greet As lightness finds my eye And as it reaches, taking hold I’m thankful for the gift To make it through this dreariness With spirits now to lift

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Date: 10/17/2018 10:40:00 AM
Nothing like the sun to cheer us up. Once again, as Nature goes, so follows (often) human nature in its wake...Nice poem, Mike! ~ Gershon
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/17/2018 12:49:00 PM
Thanks so much Gershon!!
Date: 10/16/2018 3:42:00 PM
A great rhyme; so true. Beautifully penned.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/16/2018 3:53:00 PM
Thank you, Your kinds words are so nice xxoo
Date: 10/15/2018 1:05:00 PM
A great inspiring poem on hope and written in wonderful rhyme scheme wow! It as bright as silver lining in metaphor . Kudos. , plz do write your thoughts/ comment under my newest poem too.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/15/2018 2:00:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kinds comments !!!
Date: 10/15/2018 12:43:00 PM
This lovely poem really resonates with me, Mike! Janice
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/15/2018 2:00:00 PM
Thank you Janice xxoo
Date: 10/14/2018 9:43:00 PM
Uplifting poem--a metaphor for real life--well done, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/15/2018 5:59:00 AM
Thanks much Vijay, Happy Monday!!
Date: 10/14/2018 5:10:00 PM
such uplifting lines Mike, hope you have a great Sunday:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/14/2018 5:32:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan, the same to you xxoo
Date: 10/14/2018 4:23:00 PM
Interesting...nice poem about better times..we all fall down or soak in the rain... so glad to see the sun peek through...
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/14/2018 5:31:00 PM
Thanks and glad to hear from you Silent One !! Happy Sunday
Date: 10/14/2018 4:22:00 PM
This is certainly uplifting. I am happy for you with this poem Mike. and Happy Sunday :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/14/2018 5:30:00 PM
Thanks and Happy Sunday Miss Heidi xxoo

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