Hope

The time had come for him to let go
The time for him to give up and say no
But his heart still pumped life And hope
He wouldn't simply give up his rope 
Another man hangs steadily on the line 
But he is sure to let go sometime.
For how long can a man hold on
between heaven and hell, 
Wailing the same old song

He held on fearfully with all his life dearly
As his life played before his eyes clearly, 
He slipped a little and he felt the heat
Heat from the sulfur and brimstone of hell's pit 
And he prayed for a hand to hold him up
Before he could fall in a eternal nap
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Agustin Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 5:57 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
WALKINGSHOES Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 5:50 PM
Great one there!
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