Hope 2

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Let's bring hope where there's none Everything is better when love is shown Without Hope there are no dreams If you don't believe there's nothing it seems Whatever happens light a candle of Hope Then hang on for life and climb the rope Don't ever quit on any of your goals And never let anything destroy your soul Let's bring more Hope into the light Remember there's a new day after the night Yesterday is gone, don't look back too much With your present life and loves keep in touch Let's bring Hope and make it every part And show that you care from your heart Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 November 19,2014

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Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/19/2014 8:39:00 PM

Without hope, many people would not want to wake up everyday. Beautifully written Dorian.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/19/2014 11:22:00 PM

Thank you Brenda! :) xxxx D.

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/19/2014 4:11:00 PM

"D" -- Hope does ring eternal!! A quite beautiful Couplet here. The tenor, rhyme, words, and positive message are well-transmitted to the reader. I really enjoyed reading this positive and upbeat message this evening. Another Dorian great write here!! Best Always and Spill Ink!! Gary (P.S. A "7" too!!)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/19/2014 11:23:00 PM

Hi Gary! Thank you so much for all your kindness! :) xxxxx D.

David Meade

Date: 11/19/2014 3:19:00 PM

We have plenty of opportunity to do what you so elegantly write -- to give hope and love to the people around us. Keep dreaming my friend -- they do come true.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/19/2014 11:20:00 PM

Thank you so much David! :) xxx D.