Hope

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*Image of Hope Member Feeling by Pixabay AUDIO: Nuthin But A G Thang by Dr Dre & Snoop Dog Hope It begins from depths within unmeasurable plunging phantoms down festerin' the grounds Lingerin' up sounds trace sin space sing Astir the Astros call on the cosmos play-sures endeavors Psyche assimilators consciousness dabbles Wake the dreamers the unreal the liars The dream team zookeepers senses that it sucks as it pants in suspense feeling the zeal for realism Tangibles hand-all with care The Dreamer Ahh! Wakes up now to form just a tad late yet find I brave and craving Echoes from a conch shell sounds of the see voice articulates to be alert and reassert Reach for the stars else, no heaven be simply permeate and then create the essence It's dope when one invokes! HOPE ... Loves and losses revives relived rejoice. 2022 February 02 *1st Place* A BRIAN STRAND INFORMEL ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 March 14

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/14/2022 7:03:00 PM

Great truths on hope very beautifully written. Congratulations!

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/16/2022 1:48:00 PM

Hi Hilo, You've penned a well-written and clever write on hope. Congrats on your win. Have a nice day-Alexis

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/16/2022 4:56:00 AM

Much depth to your write--an insightful discourse on hope my friend. You always rise above ordinary, William. BIG congrats!

Mohan Chutani

Date: 2/16/2022 1:54:00 AM

Congratulations for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan

Constance La France

Date: 2/2/2022 1:52:00 PM

William, a wonderful poem of hope with depth and perfect feelings ~ Constance

Valsa George

Date: 2/2/2022 4:12:00 AM

Reach for the stars Else, no heaven be ... You have fitted Robert Browning's famous quote at the right place ! A poem of great depth expressing the manifold dimensions of hope. " ...It's dope when one invokes! ~ HOPE ... Loves ~ Losses revives ~ relived ~ Rejoice .." The concluding lines tell it all. This is great poetry!