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Alouette
Created by Jan Turner, the form consists of two or more stanzas of 6 lines each, (12 lines or more) with the following rhyme scheme: a, a, b, c, c, b
Syllable count: 5, 5, 7, 5, 5, 7

Hooray for Summer Winter's a bummer and Spring barely showed her face. It's time a warm sun allowed outdoor fun to spread all over the place. When color's in bloom Her scents fill the room and Summer makes Her debut. Garlands of flowers gifted by showers, crown Her gown of sparkling dew. I can hardly wait Summer's at the gate, and I'm keen to let Her in. Like a pepper pot She is sizzling hot, and I feel Her heat begin. To the beach, I'll go, where I'll take things slow feeling light as a feather. And it’ll feel so grand my toes in the sand, soaking in Her warm weather. (Alouette) 6/23/2021

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Date: 6/23/2021 7:25:00 PM
Super clever form to use in a poem about summer. Nice work, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/24/2021 6:29:00 AM
Thanks Milt, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/23/2021 10:51:00 AM
Cute poem on summer!!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/23/2021 11:39:00 AM
Thanks Smita, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.