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Hooked On The Moon

the brightest toe nail clipping in the sky the moon two points one hook where by a dangling dangler of collar and tie swung a swinging caught he estranged and left forgottenly o deranged for he deranged and hanging there saw stars drift past and faces wear the smirk n smook of laughtrous jeer that when finally loose broke out a cheer

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Date: 10/22/2024 7:18:00 AM
Your imagination is really out of the box! I always appreciate reading such incredible perspectives and descriptions ~ the flow here is incredibly captivating and your word choices are truly amazing as always, everything fits so seamlessly together. I like those ending lines as well ~ quite a cleverly crafted piece. Sending light and best wishes to you!
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 10/22/2024 7:46:00 AM
Thank you for your kindness Hiya
Date: 10/22/2024 5:33:00 AM
Ha! That first line is so you. This had a catchy flow to it
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 10/22/2024 6:14:00 AM
Well thank you Tom
Date: 10/22/2024 1:46:00 AM
ok ok I laughed I confess! :)
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 10/22/2024 5:11:00 AM
Thanks for reading Arthur

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