Hooked On The Moon

the brightest toe nail clipping
in the sky the moon two points
one hook where by a dangling
dangler of collar and tie swung
a swinging caught he estranged
and left forgottenly o deranged
for he deranged and hanging 
there saw stars drift past and
faces wear the smirk n smook
of laughtrous jeer that when
finally loose broke out a cheer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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October 22, 2024 at 7:18 AM
Your imagination is really out of the box! I always appreciate reading such incredible perspectives and descriptions ~ the flow here is incredibly captivating and your word choices are truly amazing as always, everything fits so seamlessly together. I like those ending lines as well ~ quite a cleverly crafted piece. Sending light and best wishes to you!
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October 22, 2024 at 7:46 AM
Thank you for your kindness Hiya
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October 22, 2024 at 1:46 AM
ok ok I laughed I confess! :)
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October 22, 2024 at 5:11 AM
Thanks for reading Arthur
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