Honoring My Boundaries

There was a crossed line long ago that showed me all I need to know . Upon my journey boldly drawn when boundaries were almost gone, and midnight's inky crochet shawl ripped my esteem on thinning pall, with confidence of might have been the far off light that I had seen. When lines trespass my space, to raid, I'll guard borders which were mislaid to stop pleasing each friend or kin; as false care harms real love within . Though kindness can be quite sublime in the name of my own graced time, the warm embrace of honesty will always drift back tenderly. Lewis Raynes' Your Best Honest Poem Resubmitted 9/19/2016
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Chansarkar Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 12:30 PM
Beautiful indeed.Thanks for sharing Nette!
Murray Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 11:27 AM
Beautifully written.
Scars Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 6:55 AM
lovely Nette..."warm embrace of honesty"...beautiful line...Congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Krampe Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 6:14 AM
Congrats, Nette. I like your poem; guarding one's boundaries is very important.
Raynes Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 10:59 PM
the first two lines had me in Nette, loved this poem heaps. congratulations, ur poetic friend Lewis
Ashe Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 8:26 PM
Boundary trespassers do not know what respect is! You have given something to really think about and redefine! Ink spilled, Nette, ink spilled!!! :-)
Turner Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 5:31 PM
Respecting personal boundaries is something most humans fail. Perhaps because our boundaries are not clearly defined. Excellent write, nette.
Parker Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 5:18 PM
Nette your poem reached a part of me where I have lines I won't allow any adult to cross..
Marty Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 2:58 PM
Well said! Overstepping the lines of one's boundaries is not acceptable. Your poem is magnificent!
Ongado Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 2:24 PM
Formidable poem to be read again. Sometimes, we give more than we should to be accepted that our boundaries are trespassed. I like this a lot!
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