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Nida and Nazim, the newlyweds noticed the newmoon. A big brown bat banished them from boon. The hubby and wife headed back inside for their honeymoon. The mystery of night brought them out again Together in love nothing could scare them for long Nocturnal sounds added to their curiosity As they explored each other in passion's song

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Date: 6/2/2015 5:02:00 AM
Nice concise write S.....and thanks for the comment....Peter.
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Date: 5/23/2015 4:37:00 PM
Congrats on a nice win. Thanks for coming to read my Angel's Hope. Have an awesome weekend ;)
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Date: 7/13/2014 11:31:00 AM
Congratulations on a very fine well-deserved win! I wish I could get it all together so beautifully!
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Date: 7/12/2014 8:47:00 PM
Congrats on a great win! Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/12/2014 7:16:00 PM
Congrats on a great write ....Seren
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Date: 7/12/2014 3:26:00 PM
Great win. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/12/2014 10:34:00 AM
Sweetly beautiful with a pinch of humor. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/12/2014 8:22:00 AM
Enjoyable piece, congratulations.
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Date: 7/12/2014 5:21:00 AM
Enjoyed Nida and Nazim's honeymoon, Kamoonpuri. congrats on the win
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 7/12/2014 8:08:00 AM
Thanx soo much Dr. Ram. Regards n cheers.
Date: 5/31/2014 12:16:00 AM
Very nice indeed!
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Date: 5/12/2014 2:38:00 PM
I didn't know a 3 lines is a poem but Alliteration it is the middle line. My piece is from a Catholic Daily Devotions. Thank you for feeding my knowledge. Please read my "To Be in Heaven" That will tell you I'm a Catholic, thank you.
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Date: 1/26/2014 1:01:00 PM
cute alliteration. I liked line one best.
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Date: 12/24/2013 12:01:00 AM
ooo. I like the way this ended... LINDA
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Date: 12/23/2013 2:32:00 PM
LoL..this is a very happy honeymoon! ;p ..awe penned!
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