Honeymooners

Nida and Nazim, the newlyweds noticed the newmoon.
A big brown bat banished them from boon.
The hubby and wife headed back inside for their honeymoon.
The mystery of night brought them out again
Together in love nothing could scare them for long
Nocturnal sounds added to their curiosity 
As they explored each other in passion's song
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Holmes Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 5:02 AM
Nice concise write S.....and thanks for the comment....Peter.
Duncan Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 4:37 PM
Congrats on a nice win. Thanks for coming to read my Angel's Hope. Have an awesome weekend ;)
Sietesantos Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 11:31 AM
Congratulations on a very fine well-deserved win! I wish I could get it all together so beautifully!
Smith Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 8:47 PM
Congrats on a great win! Hugs.. Arlene
Roberts Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 7:16 PM
Congrats on a great write ....Seren
Johnson Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 3:26 PM
Great win. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Gibson Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 10:34 AM
Sweetly beautiful with a pinch of humor. Congratulations.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 8:22 AM
Enjoyable piece, congratulations.
Mehta Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 5:21 AM
Enjoyed Nida and Nazim's honeymoon, Kamoonpuri. congrats on the win
Kamoonpuri Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 8:08 AM
Thanx soo much Dr. Ram. Regards n cheers.
Javed Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 12:16 AM
Very nice indeed!
Mendoza Avatar
May 12, 2014 at 2:38 PM
I didn't know a 3 lines is a poem but Alliteration it is the middle line. My piece is from a Catholic Daily Devotions. Thank you for feeding my knowledge. Please read my "To Be in Heaven" That will tell you I'm a Catholic, thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 1:01 PM
cute alliteration. I liked line one best.
A   Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 12:01 AM
ooo. I like the way this ended... LINDA
Torres Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 2:32 PM
LoL..this is a very happy honeymoon! ;p ..awe penned!
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