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She felt his hands so gently lift her hair Her fingers trembled on the moistened quill She knew his lips would graze her shoulder bare Her writing she kept up to mask her thrill He pressed into her back his angel face as thighs of steel closed in on rounded hips Her line of thought she could no longer trace, for she was lost in wonder of his lips Her sonnet all forgot, her quill fell down She felt his hands undo the single bow that loosely held together evening gown She smiled at wanton ways she’d come to know With patience born of love he did undress She leaned back on his chest till she was freed His hands sought out her breasts with sweet caress and in their palmed embrace she sensed his need She stood up to her feet, and she turned round to face her lover seated on his chair She drew his face to taste what hands had found, for well she knew the pleasure he found there She watched his mouth and tongue dominion claim A moan from deep within escaped her lips She felt herself go weak, and he untame for grip of hands just tightened on her hips And soon she found herself on bed of love Enraptured was her body and her mind With trembling hand she touched his face above as he plunged to her depths release to find As morning light tinged sky in pink array, she slipped out of his arms and sat to write The honeyed words dripped down without delay and soaked the page in rhyme of love’s delight Eileen Manassian

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/13/2015 11:38:00 PM
Just found this jewel my good friend. You never fail on delivering a fantastic piece when you write on hot romance! Super ten on this and bravo!!!
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Date: 12/5/2015 3:14:00 PM
I hope you break through the writers block very soon And another seven for this
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/5/2015 11:11:00 PM
I've only been able to work on two collaborations: one with Paul Callus and one with Robert Lindly. I hope my muse is back soon. Hugs
Date: 12/5/2015 3:12:00 PM
I'll bet this happens to you all the time my little Desert Orchid, thinking about it, the way you writr it must do lol. A wonderlust write. Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/5/2015 11:10:00 PM
Thank you, Mr Seal. I do love writing of romance and passion. It is my soul's pleasure and does come easily to me. I'm glad you enjoyed this write. Take care.
Date: 11/30/2015 2:24:00 PM
Wow lady! i have no words but maybe a request to hold your pen for one second...maybe to have words flow like yours do. i think you are a lucky lady that truly loves deep and that is deeply loved. i super enjoyed:-)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/5/2015 11:09:00 PM
Njeri....thanks ever so much for your visit to my poem, Honeyed Words. Your words flow very sweetly too, my dear. Thank you that you took the time to read and comment. Much appreciated, dear.
Date: 11/29/2015 9:07:00 PM
I love the steamy, atomic instinct of these two lovers, Eileen. Fascinating and colorful language, as always...beautiful work!!Always, Laura
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/5/2015 11:08:00 PM
Thanks for your visit to my Honeyed Words poem, Laura. I will be by to visit you soon, dear.
Date: 11/29/2015 3:54:00 PM
I hope all is well in your homeland. I know there has been much turmoil. Most of all I hope you are well and safe. I think of you often and you are always in my payers.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/29/2015 3:56:00 PM
Thanks, dear. It's good to see you back. Yes... There has been some strife...sad. ...but life must go on. Hugs to you.
Date: 11/29/2015 3:49:00 PM
Hello poetess of the night. A Fav!
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Date: 11/29/2015 2:39:00 AM
I prefer to think of it this way, quality over quantity! I dont mind when I cant write, I know is like refilling the car with gas! More for later! Plus, you must know, keeping one anticipating, is also not always bad!!!!! :) Hugs!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/29/2015 2:44:00 AM
Man....now that's a lesson I should have learned eons ago. I'm more of a give...when you feel the need....type of person. Sometimes....making a person wait....is better. You are right! Hopefully soon I will have something to share. I start and discard. Hopefully soon. Hugs
Date: 11/29/2015 2:10:00 AM
How the hell am I gonna get some sleep after reading this!!!!! Not Fair!!!!! Never the less, even I shall suffer so, this is a romantically beautiful poem ( I have better words but wont say here LOL )
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/29/2015 2:20:00 AM
:) Aren't you a dear. Thank you Arthur. As you can see....I'm in a rut. This is the last poem I posted....a week ago. Can't seem to get my mind to function. Thanks for the lovely sweet comment. Really cheered me up no end. Hugs. :)
Date: 11/28/2015 2:18:00 PM
Sensual and finesse...Your words are more fragrant than chanel 5 my dear. A fave.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/29/2015 2:21:00 AM
That is a fragrant compliment that soothes me, Charmaine. Thank you, dear. Hugs
Date: 11/26/2015 6:23:00 PM
Very suggestive, sensual, imaginative, and full of emotion. Your words define the heart of good poetry, provocative and emotionally charged. Emile.
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Date: 11/26/2015 5:31:00 PM
Eileen.....I love your sensual writes!! So full of passion and delight. You rock! Hugs
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Date: 11/26/2015 7:45:00 AM
Hi Eileen, I wrote a Terzanelle. I know they are your favorite. I thought I was overdue to write one.
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Date: 11/25/2015 11:39:00 AM
Lovely, sensual write Eileen.. I quite enjoyed reading it tonight. I sincerely hope your week is a good one so far ;) *hugs*
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Date: 11/24/2015 12:17:00 PM
Sensual, evocative work here. Please comment on my Paranoid Vistas poem when you have time! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/24/2015 1:45:00 PM
Hello, Matthew. I did comment on your work. I'm interested to know what made you ask me to read it. Thanks for reading my work.
Date: 11/24/2015 12:05:00 PM
- A hot steamy romantic writing, Eileen :) - Beautiful! - Warm thoughts & hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/24/2015 1:56:00 PM
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/24/2015 1:46:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine....It seems I'm running out of steam in my writes lately. Had to spice things up. Thanks for your visit, dear.
Date: 11/24/2015 10:16:00 AM
She watched his mouth and tongue dominion claim A moan from deep within escaped her lips She felt herself go weak, and he untame for grip of hands just tightened on her hips,,lovely inspiring words
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/24/2015 1:46:00 PM
Thank you for showing which parts of my work appealed to you.
Date: 11/24/2015 9:09:00 AM
Good morning/ good afternoon. I hope you are in the middle of an excellent day! Hugs Rick.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/24/2015 1:47:00 PM
Thank you, Richard. I'm at the end of my day. Just working on a test for my Communication Skills class. :( Tomorrow I need to wake up in the wee hours to correct some essays. It's a living. Hugs
Date: 11/23/2015 5:10:00 PM
Hot hot melting the words onto paper...beautifully penned :) xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/24/2015 1:50:00 PM
Thank you, Cas. I'm glad you liked this piece.
Date: 11/23/2015 4:36:00 PM
The pause, between the initial part of the poem and its later continuation, is sensual and passionate. There the imagination is teased with awesome imagery. Glad to see that you used your favourite quill to write this one:) Hugs // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/24/2015 1:51:00 PM
Thank you, Paul. It is my favorite quill....it begs to be used. ;) Hugs
Date: 11/23/2015 2:28:00 PM
Boy Howdy -- that was a good read!! Made my heart beat a little faster!! Better than a hot coffee of couple on a cold morning! Kidding aside, fantastic poem LO! You do these so well.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/24/2015 1:52:00 PM
Thanks, David. I'm glad that you liked this piece. Coffee on a cold morning can be very good.... LO is pleased with the visit.
Date: 11/23/2015 10:13:00 AM
It's good to see you posting, I hope you are feeling better.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/23/2015 10:27:00 AM
I was...took another dip. Will see when I can post again. Thanks
Date: 11/23/2015 9:26:00 AM
We have ooh la la hotness with this one Eileen. 7777777777777!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/23/2015 9:51:00 AM
Thank you, Richard. I had a long weekend. Today was a celebration of Independence Day in Lebanon. Just came back from an outing with the family. I decided to take advantage and post a couple of poems while I had the time. As you know....I've been going through some things, and this past week has been a very difficult one for me. Thanks for the visit and post.
Date: 11/23/2015 1:47:00 AM
wooohhhh so sensual you really are the mistress of passion my friend:-) hugs jan xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/23/2015 9:53:00 AM
Thank you, sweetie. So good to read your post. I've missed you....was wondering if something had gone amiss. Hugs
Date: 11/23/2015 12:33:00 AM
So this is how you come to write such good poetry, Eileen.... very sensuous, made me go all wibbly wobbly. Viv x
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/23/2015 9:53:00 AM
Wibbly Wobbly is good. We ned wibbles and wobbles now and again...thanks for the visit, Viv. I appreciate it.

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