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Honeyed Dew

Like honey from a spoon warmed in a cup of tea the mist suspends itself from the ripe red buds of maple and grape. In fascination the light shatters prisms on the chandelier of life. Worlds of I and eye reflect outward. Tulips sip and daffodils dance in beaded gowns of dew. Wind sweeps mana to the beaks of birds. Rivulets roll down window panes cleansing the visage of man’s abode.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/10/2011 7:33:00 PM
Quite a picture. Vince
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Date: 4/1/2010 2:58:00 PM
This is gorgeous stuff you are writing lately...love it!! (soup mail :)!!!
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Date: 3/31/2010 10:13:00 AM
Beautiful writing here, Deborah ... lots of great visuals and as its raining here in the NWest, this is a happening ... smile ...
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Date: 3/30/2010 6:37:00 AM
The muse made her sacerdotal rounds and touched your pen with visions of her faith. Fantastic and refreshing: Wind sweeps mana to the beaks of birds. One love
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Date: 3/30/2010 6:11:00 AM
So lovely .. u do free verse so well. Debbie.. come see us over at.... http.//poetrypub.ning.com... u will luv it .. check it out ..just for fun and for me please..thankxxx Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/28/2010 11:59:00 PM
Lovely crafted poetry Debbie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 3/28/2010 11:36:00 PM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Debbie.rgds Brian
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Date: 3/28/2010 4:54:00 PM
Oh wow and wow again, so beautifully crafted and visually stunning. A pleasure to read. Love Heidie
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Date: 3/28/2010 2:34:00 PM
'In beaded gowns of dew"...Wow, Deb! The whole poem flows with much grace and beauty! Gotta' feeling spring is on its way up in New England? - Tim
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Date: 3/28/2010 2:14:00 PM
Luv it Deborah,wonderfully fresh and clean,thanx!
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